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Fellowship

6 - The Return of the Fellowship of the Ring to the Two Towers - Comm, vcharon, Dp, junk, crazy, Rock,

Awesome. Great work, this is a game I would want to play if it existed. Might as well critique, in case you plan on doing something similar with Final Fantasy XVI.

-Loved the twist, though I kinda predicted it early on. You still pushed me away by making Krinia seem innocent and the real villain to be Zukan/Vignus. It came at a perfect time.

-I also thought the characters received lots of development, especially with their respective quests in the last third. Artemis was my favorite, and I thought Gulrock and Lucilla could have been touched upon some more.

-...Blitz however was a complete dork and a crappy main. There's nothing that differentiates him from annoying mains like Edge Maverick, Dean, etc. with his constant "I won't ever give up!" an annoying positive attitude, as well as dumb, impulsive moments like running at the villain trying to stab them even though it's not going to work obviously. I didn't buy the love story between him and Melana at all. In fact, Artemis should have just killed off Blitz and took the protagonist position.

-I'd play this. The world is huge and well developed, and there seems to be lots to do. The only other thing I would have done is added more FF references. Even though you had plenty, these days FF games are peppered with many little nods to the older games in the series (and you did say it was a love tap to FFVI). Something like Gilgamesh, Ultima Weapon (the weapon), the Weapons (Omega, Ultima, etc), would have been nice. Maybe you'll get to it during sidequests?

Anyway I enjoyed reading this, I'm gonna go and read your KH3 now.

Did she just perform the sending?

Sweet, can't wait for the big finale. But where are the chocobos?

Ry Senkari posted...
Some notes at this point.

We're about 80% of the way through the main quest at this point. I'm actually worried that this game is too long, I was thinking I'd have to pad it out with more fetch quests but I might have made it too long already, it's got a ton of dungeons. It's a hark back to the old style of RPGs, with lots of dungeons to traverse and explore, in contrast with modern RPGs where every dungeon is huge and sprawling and filled with cutscenes and blah. Some feedback, of course, would be nice.

Blitz is not dead. Hark is not dead. Krynia was intended to be the main villain all along. I tried to dance around the subject so as not to spoil, but since the game's biggest spoiler is now out, I'm willing to spoil other things too.


FFV was long and had many dungeons.

Oh and I called it back then. I was sure she would end up being the villain all along even though after a while I thought it would just end up being Vignus or Zukan or something... but that wouldn't be too much fun now would it? Anyway the last update was awesome. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Now that I think about it, I'm pretty positive it's going to be that certain person. This could be interesting.

Also, how did they get to kunara? It seems like they finished off the fortress and then all of a sudden they're on the new continent, unless I'm missing something.

Pretty good so far, but is there a primary antagonist yet? It would be pretty interesting to see one at this point, before it's too late. I liked how FFV, VI, and VII had a villain present through almost the entire game.

Looking forward to it.

I like this, it kinda gives me an FFV vibe. The only thing I'd suggest is to add some FF references at this point, like chocobos, moogles, monsters etc (I'm guessing you have Cid planned already). I say continue this, it's an entertaining read.