From: ZFS | #062
add '-ly' to like
is that it does this make the planet livable again
And edit 'all right' to 'alright'. And rework Mustadio's first line into this:
Mustadio: Baert's curs are nowhere to be seen, yet there's no sign of a battle with Lionel's Gryphons...
...Something's amiss. I'm going to see what I can find out. We'll meet afterward.
But then, that's a substantial amount of rewriting for such a brief exchange, isn't it? That's kind of the point of the complaints with WotL. People don't speak that way.
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