From: GranzonEx | #005
If you can write better fanfiction that Kishi I will pay to read it.
Ah wow, someone who actually comes into this topic for the Naruto story. Well okay. Basically the premise of my story is to follow the 4th Hokage into death and see how he would react to all of the people who died in the Naruto canon while dealing with the Shinigami and other forces of the afterlife. It is a humor story at its core, that gets serious every now and again. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2811325/1/Konohas_Yellow_Flash_Really_Hates_Paperwork
If you enjoy it or hate it, all I ask from board 8ers is they leave a review after every chapter and tell me what I got right and what I didn't. Some of the chapters suffer from comma splicing and general formatting issues, but those clear up a ways in.
As for your rating, 5.4 Never seen you before, but you are interested in Naruto!
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Sir Chris
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