This is funny, we apparently can't decide what gender Ardian Syaf is. I made the mistake of originally thinking he was a girl, and it looks like you tried to fix that a bit, but you missed a lot, so he goes back and forth between being a he and a she.
For real LtM, you didn't really try too hard when editing, did you? >_>
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