ImTheMacheteGuy posted...
nice so far.
I think you got resistance and catastrophy mixed up at one point. Resistance (speaking in 3rd person) leaves, but then agrees (not in 3rd person) to join Pirate and Kazbar even though it said that catastrophy was the only one left with them. Catastrophy is not mentioned again but resistance is later spying on Nio/Natwaf >_> (just wanted to point this out)
Yeah I forgot to mention that.
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