LogFAQs > #964415480

Alright, I'll try to give you more constructive criticism. But first, I must tell you that I didn't think the video was made by you. I thought you were shitposting or something, or perhaps just saying that you liked that video. Now that's out of the way, let's begin.

The two main reasons why I dislike the song are 1) your singing and 2) the genre. When it comes to the instrumentals, I may be biased against it due to my tastes. The same cannot be said about the vocals however. It almost seems like you're just talking at times, and there's no melody or harmony in it. I do, however, find the "peaks" somewhat decent, e.g. 0:43 to 0:53. The lyrics are bland and unimaginative, but I don't think you were trying to write something really special. It might as well have been on purpose, which isn't necessarily a bad thing.

Next up is more positive. The part where you're grimacing at 0:34 is weird and grotesque, but I'm pretty sure that's what you were going for and you succeeded. I think it works. It's trashy, but in a good way. The costumes are good for such an obviously low budget. They also fit the theme. You could have used actual surgical masks, but you went for exaggerated humor. The plague doctor is also a good idea.