LogFAQs > #971891764

I liked it, you got my attention and I like your style, but yeh if there had been more confidence in there that kinda humor would hit harder, you felt most confident in the beginning ans at the with the slut phase jokes. And some parts felt rushed especially the final joke.

Overall I felt you drew me in and I found it funny and somewhat relatable (Inhave strabimus where my left eye can wander outward, had surgery once). With more confidence it will deliver even better, keep it up, Id watch it.