BlinkyGoldfish posted... Big comedy fan here, and just watched the video TC.
Your writing isnt badbut heres a few things.
#1 thing that bugs me is the clicking sound you make constantly throughout the video. Its a sign of nervousness, almost like a tick. You gotta cut that out. Like ASAP.
You definitely do need to project more confidence in general. The content and the writing/material isnt bad at all. Your execution needs work though. Too many filler words and too much downtime.
That being said, great job! I go to a lot of local comedy shows here in my town and youd do well at the shows I go to. Ive always been interested in trying it sometime. I love writing material, but Ive never had the balls to go up and perform.
have you ever puked on a car?
I ask because that's a funny comedy bit to do