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Example 5 out of 5: I have a one-minute play and sought for AI-assistance on rewriting it.

One of these versions below is my own. One of these versions below is AI-recommended after six prompts of me following up on advice it offered. Those topics included how to develop the characters, add conflict, tighten up the dialogue, and clarify the message.

ALYX: I never realized the risks you took for us to date.
KRYS: We met at a protest, not a minefield.
ALYX: A 2020 protest though, plus you still had to sneak away from your parents.
KRYS: That was the actual minefieldhad to tip-toe my way out.
ALYX: You also had an essay due the day after we met, right?
KRYS: Yeah, kinda gambled with my DACA scholarship.
ALYX: But we had fun when you weren't being so anxious.
KRYS: Just couldn't tell my boss why I was so tired the next morning.
ALYX: See? Busy bee living that risky life.
KRYS: I suppoooooooooooose.
ALYX: Hey, can I ask you something?
KRYS: Yes, and then pizza.
ALYX: Does being a Dreamer add much risk? I just, uhnever thought to ask you sooner.
[Krys smiles.]
KRYS: You still dont realize the risks I take. All cheese, please!

ALYX: I never realized the risks you took for us to date.
KRYS: Yeah, it was a wild ride.
ALYX: We met at a protest, right?
KRYS: Yeah, I had to tip-toe my way out of a minefield just to be there.
ALYX: And you had an essay due the day after we met?
KRYS: Yeah, I gambled with my DACA scholarship a little bit.
ALYX: But we had fun, right?
KRYS: Definitely, even though I was anxious about everything.
ALYX: I guess being a Dreamer adds a lot of risk to your life, huh?
KRYS: You have no idea. But it's worth it to fight for what I believe in.
ALYX: I support you, always.
KRYS: Thanks. You know, sometimes it feels like no one cares about the challenges we face.
ALYX: I care. And I know there are a lot of people who do too.
KRYS: I hope so. Because we need all the support we can get.
[They smile at each other, then turn to order pizza.]

Do I now have two versions of this script or just one? Is it ethical to use any of the edits the generated script shows? I liked some of the questions from my follow-up prompts more than the actual rewrite here -- is it ethical for me use that feedback to inspire my own original writing? And because my curiosity is strong, which one is better?

Okay I'm done making examples, just thought these might help provide anchors for conversation if we were looking to get more concrete.