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Topic	Tom reads through the Bolo Family Manga Collection (spoilers)
Tom Bombadil 08/29/18 4:46:05 PM #210:	Demon Diary, Vol. 3 Today's BGM: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S8k69zZL6JY&list=PL1M8MWromo9PGi5DgB3Rd8kiFAY8Bux8s We're still on the "how they met" flashback. Raenef tries to stick up for the captured leader of the Thieves' Guild, which of course leads him to getting in a fight with the guards despite his leader's best efforts to get him off the hook. Raenef is about to be cut down when the guard's arms are blown off. Eclipse takes it from there, freezing most of the guards and demanding the release of the guild. Eclipse explains that Raenef is his master and a Demon Lord, and Raenef rolls with it because he can eat food without having to steal it. Back to the present, Eclipse ponders Raenef's unsuitable temperament, and how sentimental he has gotten. So hey this human town is having a bad drought, so they need to offer a bride to the Demon Lord, as is custom. Leeche the loli throws a temper tantrum because she can't go with her (noble?) dad. He's protective of her, since demons got her mom. Also the girl we're gonna offer as a bride is here. Leeche overhears these last two bits and goes off on an adventure. She finds a magic portal in the basement, knocks out the bride with some kinda chemical, and goes in her place. Leeche arrives, mistakes Eclipse as the Demon Lord, (...fair, even just looking at the character designs) and declares her intent to destroy him! Unfortunately, she kinda sucks at anything physical, and is easily sidetracked into a feud with Chris. Everybody just kinda ignores her, and she later bonds a bit with Raenef after he apologizes for her mother. Eclipse says we have to send her back because there was some sort of mistake if a noble girl got sent instead of a commoner. That and he's probably jealous. Daddy shows up about then and gives her a spankin'. We accept an apology of jewels but decline the replacement bride he brought. Leeche smooches Raenef before she leaves. She'll come back for him in ten years! Eclipse confronts Nameless Important Cleric Man over just why he sent them Chris. Backstory time! Chris' town was wiped out by demons five years ago, and against the odds he survived to be found by the Clerics of Rased. Head Cleric (his name is Hejem, I guess?) senses power within the boy, and decides to raise him as his disciple and successor. Chris saw his mother die, and is dealing with all that trauma about as well as one would expect. Hejem comforts him and Rased him(?)self shows up- he chose Chris because he was the only one to call out to him. Rased wipes Chris' memory because we'll need him soon to lead Rased's people when the Demon World changes. The memory wipe didn't wipe out his hatred of demons, though. So anyway we sent him along to learn for a bit. Some super fancy powerful demon guy(?) shows up! Bonus chibi section 1: The gang is pretty sure Eclipse is going to cook them all for dinner Bonus chibi section 2: Erutis dresses as a dom and gets mad that the readers all mistook her for a guy. Hey, I thought she was a girl, I just wasn't willing to commit after the Raenef whiff >_> My rating: 8/10 Now we've got some character development, nice! I think it's time to start doing some serious plot stuff though, and maybe this dude at the end will provide that. We can only do the "I'm here to kill you whoops I'm a derp and now I'm your minion" shtick so many times, methinks. it's still disgaea fanfic tho --- Look at all those chickens I can be impulsive! I just have to think about it first! <cite>Tom Bombadil posted [p:907767472] in Tom reads ... [t:76586176]...</cite> <quote>Demon Diary, Vol. 3 Today's BGM: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S8k69zZL6JY&list=PL1M8MWromo9PGi5DgB3Rd8kiFAY8Bux8s We're still on the "how they met" flashback. Raenef tries to stick up for the captured leader of the Thieves' Guild, which of course leads him to getting in a fight with the guards despite his leader's best efforts to get him off the hook. Raenef is about to be cut down when the guard's arms are blown off. Eclipse takes it from there, freezing most of the guards and demanding the release of the guild. Eclipse explains that Raenef is his master and a Demon Lord, and Raenef rolls with it because he can eat food without having to steal it. Back to the present, Eclipse ponders Raenef's unsuitable temperament, and how sentimental he has gotten. So hey this human town is having a bad drought, so they need to offer a bride to the Demon Lord, as is custom. Leeche the loli throws a temper tantrum because she can't go with her (noble?) dad. He's protective of her, since demons got her mom. Also the girl we're gonna offer as a bride is here. Leeche overhears these last two bits and goes off on an adventure. She finds a magic portal in the basement, knocks out the bride with some kinda chemical, and goes in her place. Leeche arrives, mistakes Eclipse as the Demon Lord, (...fair, even just looking at the character designs) and declares her intent to destroy him! Unfortunately, she kinda sucks at anything physical, and is easily sidetracked into a feud with Chris. Everybody just kinda ignores her, and she later bonds a bit with Raenef after he apologizes for her mother. Eclipse says we have to send her back because there was some sort of mistake if a noble girl got sent instead of a commoner. That and he's probably jealous. Daddy shows up about then and gives her a spankin'. We accept an apology of jewels but decline the replacement bride he brought. Leeche smooches Raenef before she leaves. She'll come back for him in ten years! Eclipse confronts Nameless Important Cleric Man over just why he sent them Chris. Backstory time! Chris' town was wiped out by demons five years ago, and against the odds he survived to be found by the Clerics of Rased. Head Cleric (his name is Hejem, I guess?) senses power within the boy, and decides to raise him as his disciple and successor. Chris saw his mother die, and is dealing with all that trauma about as well as one would expect. Hejem comforts him and Rased him(?)self shows up- he chose Chris because he was the only one to call out to him. Rased wipes Chris' memory because we'll need him soon to lead Rased's people when the Demon World changes. The memory wipe didn't wipe out his hatred of demons, though. So anyway we sent him along to learn for a bit. Some super fancy powerful demon guy(?) shows up! Bonus chibi section 1: The gang is pretty sure Eclipse is going to cook them all for dinner Bonus chibi section 2: Erutis dresses as a dom and gets mad that the readers all mistook her for a guy. Hey, I thought she was a girl, I just wasn't willing to commit after the Raenef whiff >_> My rating: 8/10 Now we've got some character development, nice! I think it's time to start doing some serious plot stuff though, and maybe this dude at the end will provide that. We can only do the "I'm here to kill you whoops I'm a derp and now I'm your minion" shtick so many times, methinks. it's still disgaea fanfic tho --- Look at all those chickens I can be impulsive! I just have to think about it first!</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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