Board 8 > Which line sounds like a better ending

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crazyisgood
06/17/18 4:27:43 AM
#1:


Which line sounds like a better ending? - Results (6 votes)
Do you see us now?
66.67% (4 votes)
4
We are the invisibles
33.33% (2 votes)
2
This here would be a last line about the people who are not seen by others. No one notices them.
Title would be the Invisibles
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Forceful_Dragon
06/17/18 5:11:32 AM
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The first line makes more sense if the context is that other people have either come to understand about these people or have in some way been one upped by them or that their worth has been proven.

Otherwise i prefer the second line.
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Natwaf_akidna
06/17/18 5:16:59 AM
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Yeah gotta go with FD here.
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