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KrayzieBonezz 12/28/19 10:01:30 PM #1: |
With what's already drawn, please assist me to improve with helpful criticism por favor. I went over a few Jim Lee drawings for reference. Was undoubtedly lazy for not drawing most of the body.
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Gakk86 12/28/19 10:02:23 PM #2: |
Needs bat nipples.
You did great on the face, though. --- All generalizations are false, including this one. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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KrayzieBonezz 12/28/19 10:07:01 PM #4: |
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FF_Redux 12/28/19 10:07:37 PM #5: |
He has no pupils or iris, l2draweyes
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Mistere Man 12/28/19 10:11:06 PM #6: |
FF_Redux posted...
He has no pupils or iris, l2draweyesThey are often drawn with white eyes like that. --- Water+Fall=Radiation. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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dib153 12/28/19 10:12:44 PM #7: |
Honestly, more torso would do you justice
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viewmaster_pi 12/28/19 10:13:48 PM #8: |
tbh his pecs seem a little high
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Mistere Man 12/28/19 10:14:05 PM #9: |
KrayzieBonezz posted...
nippleShould have been one square over> https://images.app.goo.gl/QeZPX3Y3kVvoXxbY6 --- Water+Fall=Radiation. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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RchHomieQuanChi 12/28/19 10:14:56 PM #10: |
All jokes aside, it's pretty good TC.
You definitely nailed the face. --- I have nothing else to say ... Copied to Clipboard!
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KrayzieBonezz 12/28/19 10:15:44 PM #11: |
Yeah I also prefer the white eyes but for the sake of an attempt
Also fixed the nipple and I will re attempt the full body. I hate hands but its just more practice. --- R.I.P Chris, Daniel, Nancy Benoit https://youtu.be/yOL02oq2rj8 ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Alteres 12/28/19 10:25:51 PM #12: |
Nice job.
Much better with white eyes though. --- ........the ghost in the machine... IGN: Fox, FC: 5344-2646-0982 ... Copied to Clipboard!
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cjsdowg 12/28/19 10:30:05 PM #13: |
I can't think of anything I would point and say fix that. But since you asked. Maybe the logo is a bit off. But I don't know I am looking hard for bad stuff and can't find much.
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Vol2tex 12/28/19 10:40:29 PM #14: |
A Jim Lee fan!
The only issues that stand out are the right side of the body (our left) looks a bit wide, and the eyes can line up slightly better. --- ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Mistere Man 12/28/19 10:58:08 PM #15: |
KrayzieBonezz posted...
Yeah I also prefer the white eyes but for the sake of an attemptLooks great! I personally liked it a bit better with the white eyes, but still it looks great. --- Water+Fall=Radiation. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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The Popo 12/28/19 11:06:26 PM #16: |
Thats impressive
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KrayzieBonezz 12/28/19 11:08:01 PM #17: |
Minus the nipple and the pupils because c'mon. I shortened the length of the shoulder touched up his chest symbol a little bit and touched on the eyes as well. Not sure if I made a difference on the eyes though. Also added a bit more shadow to the cape
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Mistere Man 12/28/19 11:11:10 PM #18: |
Without nipples what will Batman do to keep themselves entertained?
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Guide 12/28/19 11:12:51 PM #19: |
As a sketch, it's solid. Like, Maybe just clean it up on better paper, you'd have a good cover.
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KrayzieBonezz 12/28/19 11:18:08 PM #20: |
Guide posted...
As a sketch, it's solid. Like, Maybe just clean it up on better paper, you'd have a good cover.Clean it up. Computer paper or sketch paper. Maybe have the trinity standing at a gravestone. Ink it. Paint it. Have my own cover for JLA or something? I like it. --- R.I.P Chris, Daniel, Nancy Benoit https://youtu.be/yOL02oq2rj8 ... Copied to Clipboard!
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