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AwesomeTurtwig 05/23/20 11:52:48 PM #1: |
It's not public yet. --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Sahuagin 05/24/20 12:05:55 AM #2: |
the image is unreadable
are any of the preview media videos or just images? acheivments? --- ... Copied to Clipboard!
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AwesomeTurtwig 05/24/20 12:10:18 AM #3: |
Sahuagin posted...
the image is unreadableOh darn. Try this one. https://i.imgur.com/CaKWqOV.png --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ ... Copied to Clipboard!
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agesboy 05/24/20 12:18:29 AM #4: |
https://i.gyazo.com/61eaa814fb479d6fd586b68b2720d743.png
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AwesomeTurtwig 05/24/20 12:40:01 AM #5: |
agesboy posted...
https://i.gyazo.com/61eaa814fb479d6fd586b68b2720d743.pngThe imgur link doesn't work? --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ReggieTheReckless 05/24/20 12:42:43 AM #6: |
no critiques of the page, but get achievements out ASAP. It seems silly, but a lot of people can see them as a selling point
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Sahuagin 05/24/20 12:46:33 AM #7: |
There are minor issues with the writing, but I feel like I'm being super nitpicky by pointing them out. (and I'm not necessarily right)
"Biologger was developed with speedrunning in mind, how fast can you beat the game?" is a run-on sentence. "Over 5" sounds weird since it's a small number "Speedrunner friendly, plan your route and try to get the best time!" is a run-on sentence (or something else) If the fifth bullet point has an exclamation mark, then the other ones should end in periods (maybe... not 100% sure) (sounds like if each line is a sentence they should get periods; but since this is marketing material appearance might matter more than punctuation) "...here's a sneak peak of some of the features that will be available upon release!" should maybe end in a colon. --- ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Krazy_Kirby 05/24/20 12:52:56 AM #8: |
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AwesomeTurtwig 05/24/20 3:37:31 AM #9: |
ReggieTheReckless posted...
no critiques of the page, but get achievements out ASAP. It seems silly, but a lot of people can see them as a selling pointPerhaps, but keep in mind this is the page for the demo. Full game isn't out for a while. --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ ... Copied to Clipboard!
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YoukaiSlayer 05/24/20 3:40:46 AM #10: |
A little unsure why theres 2 versions of the soundtrack available in the "content for this game" section. Looks like the only difference is a hyphen. Other than that the page looks fine to me. Since the unique mechanics are a selling point, it might be nice to have a video showing off some of the cooler things you can do with it. It's hard to know if the challenge is more about speed or precision without any footage or anything but thats a small thing especially since this is a demo.
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AwesomeTurtwig 05/24/20 3:43:15 AM #11: |
YoukaiSlayer posted...
A little unsure why theres 2 versions of the soundtrack available in the "content for this game" section. Looks like the only difference is a hyphen. Other than that the page looks fine to me. Since the unique mechanics are a selling point, it might be nice to have a video showing off some of the cooler things you can do with it. It's hard to know if the challenge is more about speed or precision without any footage or anything but thats a small thing especially since this is a demo.Yeah I'm in the process of putting a trailer together. The soundtrack thing I am aware of. Since neither are released, for someone who doesn't own them, they won't see either. --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ ... Copied to Clipboard!
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AwesomeTurtwig 05/25/20 9:13:35 PM #12: |
Just got 10 new keys for the demo.
Anyone interested? --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ReggieTheReckless 05/25/20 9:15:33 PM #13: |
I probably wouldn't play it, but thank you for offering :)
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LinkPizza 05/25/20 9:15:47 PM #14: |
Sure. Ill try it!
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Pus_N_Pecans 05/26/20 9:48:24 AM #15: |
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AwesomeTurtwig 05/27/20 7:54:31 PM #16: |
LinkPizza posted...
Sure. Ill try it!I'll PM you a key on Discord. --- http://potders.com/sigs/1.gif My flash games: http://bit.ly/kO1BDd Rule free PotD: http://www.potders.com/forum/ ... Copied to Clipboard!
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