Current Events > Plan to start writing my first original story inspired by some media

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Do you like how this sounds? an idea for an original story and character kinda.
The main group is a mix of existing characters personalities though, (not meant to be existing characters though they are intended as original characters and they have enough differences to be unrecognisable)
The wholesomeness of felicia (fire emblem fates) and the awkward earnesty of her character also she is a maid
However she has an aggressive side where she snaps from the work she does and It unvoluntarily comes out sometimes and it's kinda like celestia ludenburgs (danganronpa) aggressive real side. still working things out on the story but it has a few wildly different entertaining characters and a few love interests where she works at an undercover assassination team she is the undercover maid assassin and she Hates the job but needs the money however the people there are aware of how capable at assassination she is and the team assasinates criminals who are good at hiding their villainous ways and their secrets. They use her cos she's the strongest and sometimes they purposely stress her out to make her want to murder easier and let out her stress on her targets what do you guys think? also some people feel guilty of their work and well I'll go more into it when i plan out more of an early draft. It'll be dramatic but have some lighthearted down time moments it's extremely early though I have some comedic scenes I'd like to insert. My dream comparison to this would be like anti evil ace attorney cos the characters have to frame the murder on someone and they have a lawyer on their side so the evil lawyer the main characters close friend frames it on another bad person (if its not clear they kill a bad people and then frame it on another bad person)

Does this sound messy/hacky or does it sound good?

Every character should have a verbal tick.
There should be an American character who calls potato chips crisps.
Another character should do the Dr Wily eyebrow thing a lot.

ViewtifulJoe posted...

Every character should have a verbal tick.
There should be an American character who calls potato chips crisps.
Another character should do the Dr Wily eyebrow thing a lot.

Yes I will have an American character the location is Britain though cos I am British myself and the maid motif fits British good and they like tea idk...