Current Events > Rate my 3D model #3

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Whatcha think, fam???
https://3dc.io/gallery/98d6a9e3022a48f485951188d022fc7726fd88a9
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not bad, i think beveling some of those hard edges would look nice though
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Looks like a stock model you can grab from the examples list

Go fam yourself.
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its the same as the first one you posted
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ModLogic posted...

its the same as the first one you posted

Nah, the first one I posted was a semi anime face
I also made another console model too!
https://3dc.io/gallery/f85a35acb87b41ada23e22307eacda0d1d9aba00
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I just see a spinning 2D icosahedron.
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Okay, it loaded.

Nitpick time!

1. The screen is not flush with the rest of the unit. It juts out unsafely, ready to slice the hands of children.
2. There are no seams from where the halves of the plastic case were assembled.
3. There are no ventilation ports, which means it will probably overheat like the Apple III
4. The form factor is too fat. It seems like you went for a 16:9 or 16:10 aspect ratio unlike the 4:3 screens more common to the era.
5. There's some empty space above the screen that does nothing but look ugly. Perhaps you should make the distance between the edge of the screen and the edge of the console the same on all sides except down.
6. You need to make sure the corners are rounded so that if you throw the device at a friend, they'll suffer blunt force trauma rather than lacerations.
7. Buttons should be beveled or rounded to prevent kids from slicing their fingers open
8. The cartridge has absolutely no detail. A missed opportunity! You might also model at least the edges of the cartridge slot so that it doesn't just look like a couple rectangles intersecting.
9. The speaker holes look like buttons
10. You're missing an ergonomic slant under the speaker holes. Adding this would make resting the corner of the device on your hand more comfortable.
11. The start, select, and battery labels are missing.
12. The on-off switch, contrast dial, brightness dial, power supply jack, and link cable jack are all missing
13. The battery light looks like a button rather than a light
14. You're missing the battery compartment
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HashtagTartarus posted...

Okay, it loaded.

Nitpick time!

1. The screen is not flush with the rest of the unit. It juts out unsafely, ready to slice the hands of children.
2. There are no seams from where the halves of the plastic case were assembled.
3. There are no ventilation ports, which means it will probably overheat like the Apple III
4. The form factor is too fat. It seems like you went for a 16:9 or 16:10 aspect ratio unlike the 4:3 screens more common to the era.
5. There's some empty space above the screen that does nothing but look ugly. Perhaps you should make the distance between the edge of the screen and the edge of the console the same on all sides except down.
6. You need to make sure the corners are rounded so that if you throw the device at a friend, they'll suffer blunt force trauma rather than lacerations.
7. Buttons should be beveled or rounded to prevent kids from slicing their fingers open
8. The cartridge has absolutely no detail. A missed opportunity! You might also model at least the edges of the cartridge slot so that it doesn't just look like a couple rectangles intersecting.
9. The speaker holes look like buttons
10. You're missing an ergonomic slant under the speaker holes. Adding this would make resting the corner of the device on your hand more comfortable.
11. The start, select, and battery labels are missing.
12. The on-off switch, contrast dial, brightness dial, power supply jack, and link cable jack are all missing
13. The battery light looks like a button rather than a light
14. You're missing the battery compartment

^its still a work in progress :(
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