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XplodnPnguins92 12/13/18 6:40:50 PM #1:	"Thank you for placing your trust and confidence in us, in support of our business this year." --- https://imgur.com/Dn9vLMi <cite>XplodnPnguins92 posted [p:914077893] in Is this se... [t:77299601]...</cite> <quote>"Thank you for placing your trust and confidence in us, in support of our business this year."</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Space_Man 12/13/18 6:41:28 PM #2:	No. --- There sure are a lot of different mes just like you have a lot of different yous! I'm going outside to play now I hope all the different yous have fun too. Bye! <cite>Space_Man posted [p:914077922] in Is this se... [t:77299601]...</cite> <quote>No.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
XplodnPnguins92 12/13/18 6:43:03 PM #3:	i'll take that as a yes. --- https://imgur.com/Dn9vLMi <cite>XplodnPnguins92 posted [p:914077999] in Is this se... [t:77299601]...</cite> <quote>i'll take that as a yes.</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
Space_Man 12/13/18 6:57:15 PM #4:	It's a comma splice. "Thank you for placing your trust & confidence in us this year" "Thank you for your support and confidence in our business this year" "Thank you for your support" Those are all better, proper statments. Who is "us" - is it the business? Then you can already assume that 'our business' is included in the "us." What does acknowledging a display of support accomplish in addition to the aforementioned show of trust/confidence? Brevity is the soul of wit - aka "keep it simple, stupid" --- There sure are a lot of different mes just like you have a lot of different yous! I'm going outside to play now I hope all the different yous have fun too. Bye! <cite>Space_Man posted [p:914078640] in Is this se... [t:77299601]...</cite> <quote>It's a comma splice. "Thank you for placing your trust & confidence in us this year" "Thank you for your support and confidence in our business this year" "Thank you for your support" Those are all better, proper statments. Who is "us" - is it the business? Then you can already assume that 'our business' is included in the "us." What does acknowledging a display of support accomplish in addition to the aforementioned show of trust/confidence? Brevity is the soul of wit - aka "keep it simple, stupid"</quote> ... Copied to Clipboard!
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