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Hi my name is Kasumi Crimson Violet Per'sona Yoshizawa and I have long rose crimson hair (thats how I got my name) with it being neatly combed into a ponytail and tied up in a cute red bow and matching red eyes like flickering embers and a lot of people tell me I look like Marina Inoue (AN: if u dont know who she is get da hell out of here!). Im not related to the Yoshizawa guy that invented Oragami but I wish I was because then I could brag about it. Im a highly trained gymnast with years of experience so I'm really thin. I have pale white skin. Im also a persona user, and I go to a school filled with persona users called Shujin in Tokyo where Im in the first year (Im fifteen). Im a popular gil (in case you couldnt tell) and the uniform I have has a lot of black. I love K-mart and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a blue and black polka-dot shirt with those kinda sleeves but kinda not sleeves and a white leather miniskirt, white-thigh high socks and shiny black shoes that look like tapshes. I was wearing red lipstick, soft pink foundation, eyelash extensions and lightly layered red eye shadow. I was walking outside Shujin. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was a little bummed. A lot of plainly dressed people stared at me. I paid them no mind because I'm getting the school a bunch of sports money.

Hey Kasumi! shouted a voice. I looked up. It was. Joker Narukami!

Whats up Joker? I asked.

Nothing. he said shyly.

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

This is just the start of what I edited. And this was one of the HEAVY edits.
I made sure to have 0 new story spoilers so it's safe to read.
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My friend, Marie (AN: Gloria dis is u!) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her Short shoulder-length raven black hair with cute pins and opened her forest-green eyes. She put on her Beatles t-shirt with a button hat, long stripey gloves and thick high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (red lipstick white foundation and blue eyeliner.)

OMFG, I saw you talking to Joker Narukami yesterday! she said excitedly.

Yeah? So? I said, blushing.

Do you like Joker? she asked as we went out of our high-end apartment and into the school enterance.

No I so fucking dont! I shouted.

Yeah right! she exclaimed. Just then, Joker walked up to me.

Hi. he said.

Hi. I replied flirtily.

Guess what. he said.

What? I asked.

Well, EXO are having a concert located in Shibuya. he told me.

Oh. My. Fucking. God! I screamed. I love EXO. They are my favorite band, besides BTS.

Well. do you want to go with me? he asked.

I gasped.
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