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Doom_Art 02/08/20 10:30:12 PM #51: |
He coughs harder, getting worse. The Mechtrooper moves in their direction, hearing the violent coughing...
Rey grabs Poe by the shirt and pulls him into a KISS, hiding his face behind her headscarf. The Mechtrooper sees the two lovers from afar while the Utai women applaud in the background. He moves on. Rey and Poe pull apart. He takes a moment to recover. Hes never kissed a Jedi. E E E E E E E U U U U U U U G G G G G H H H H H --- Not removing this until Mega Man 64 is released on the Wii Virtual Console. Started on: 12/1/2009 https://imgur.com/mPvcy ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Doom_Art 02/08/20 10:32:04 PM #52: |
Iunno it just feels so weird
They've had exactly one scene together and he's like 10 or 15 years older than her --- Not removing this until Mega Man 64 is released on the Wii Virtual Console. Started on: 12/1/2009 https://imgur.com/mPvcy ... Copied to Clipboard!
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BLAKUboy 02/08/20 10:32:05 PM #53: |
Well there goes any hope of all this ReyPoe garbage just leading up to Poe being a dumb, horny bisexual mad that Finn is clueless or something.
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SSJ2GrimReaper 02/08/20 10:36:04 PM #54: |
Why are you guys surprised Treverrow would do that, haven't you seen the crap romance shit in his Jurassic movies
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BLAKUboy 02/08/20 10:37:46 PM #55: |
Chris Pratt and the velociraptor is the damn best romance in cinema.
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Doom_Art 02/08/20 10:42:35 PM #56: |
Okay so it seems like the facial scarring and mask on Kylo Ren was temporary. Tor Valum is teaching him force drain to heal himself.
Okay never mind he put the mask back on anyway --- Not removing this until Mega Man 64 is released on the Wii Virtual Console. Started on: 12/1/2009 https://imgur.com/mPvcy ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Shablagoo 02/08/20 10:43:16 PM #57: |
Doom_Art posted...
My date cancelled on me tn. So my loss is your gain, you all get to see me read and comment on this unproduced screenplay lmao xD --- "It was some post on the NFL board that got him." -AwesomeToTheMAX ... Copied to Clipboard!
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sauceje 02/08/20 10:46:08 PM #58: |
Doom_Art posted...
There's some shpeel about the First Order managing to cut off communication between "millions of systems" preventing any sort of galactic coordinationIt's actually written "spiel" --- He was born in a coop, raised in a cage, children fear him, critics rage, He's half alive, he's half dead, folks just call him Buckethead ... Copied to Clipboard!
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BLAKUboy 02/08/20 10:46:39 PM #59: |
Doom_Art posted...
Okay never mind he put the mask back on anywayWhy is the only thing all three directors could ever agree on was that Kylo was such a tryhard dweeb? --- Aeris dies if she takes more damage than her current HP - Panthera https://signavatar.com/26999_s.png ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Doom_Art 02/08/20 10:47:08 PM #60: |
Lol Kylo wanted to learn where Mortis is and Valum wouldn't tell him so Kylo just fucking probed his mind then force drained him.
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Doom_Art 02/08/20 10:47:42 PM #61: |
sauceje posted...
It's actually written "spiel"but i like spelling it that way --- Not removing this until Mega Man 64 is released on the Wii Virtual Console. Started on: 12/1/2009 https://imgur.com/mPvcy ... Copied to Clipboard!
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AvantgardeAClue 02/08/20 10:48:49 PM #62: |
au_gold posted...
The dead speak! lol --- Sometimes I say things and I'm not voice acting. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Doom_Art 02/08/20 10:53:57 PM #63: |
I'm about halfway through. I like it but I need a break.
It's honestly much better than I was expecting tbh --- Not removing this until Mega Man 64 is released on the Wii Virtual Console. Started on: 12/1/2009 https://imgur.com/mPvcy ... Copied to Clipboard!
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teepan95 02/09/20 5:32:42 AM #64: |
Fucking tag
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Noncasus 02/09/20 7:00:53 AM #65: |
Lol
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SDBZ 02/09/20 8:06:41 AM #66: |
au_gold posted...
The dead speak! That was so cringe. Dunno how it made it in --- Let's go, Mark Sein! PSN ID: RyuseiDateSRX ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Doom_Art 02/09/20 8:13:58 AM #67: |
SDBZ posted...
That was so cringe. Dunno how it made it inThe dude who wrote that also won an Oscar for writing lol --- Not removing this until Mega Man 64 is released on the Wii Virtual Console. Started on: 12/1/2009 https://imgur.com/mPvcy ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ViewtifulGrave 02/09/20 8:29:19 AM #68: |
BLAKUboy posted...
Well there goes any hope of all this ReyPoe garbage just leading up to Poe being a dumb, horny bisexual mad that Finn is clueless or something.I dont understand why people wanted Finn x Poe? Finn is obviously into Rey. Besides just because two guys hit it off doesnt mean theyre gay. --- You enjoy teaching high schoolers, and I'll enjoy creating my crappy manga. Let's see where we both are in a year. TheDoorMouse Update https://imgur.com/vz0c9xf ... Copied to Clipboard!
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iPhone_7 02/09/20 8:49:23 AM #69: |
Time & time again Finn & Poe exchange looks and their dialogue is of concern for one another. It was so obvious that Finn & Poe were lusting after each other.
Finn & Rey seems so odd and random. I dont remember any scenes of either of them being interested in the other or worrying about each other. But as I was saying earlier, it was so obvious that Finn & Poe wanted to sneak off for a little butt****ing. --- Sig User Logic https://imgur.com/lA5fm7w ... Copied to Clipboard!
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au_gold 02/09/20 9:04:54 AM #70: |
Finn did everything in TFA and TLJ for Rey.
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BLAKUboy 02/09/20 10:46:30 AM #71: |
iPhone_7 posted...
Finn & Rey seems so odd and random. I dont remember any scenes of either of them being interested in the other or worrying about each other.There was the hug on Starkiller, but even that was more like an afterthought with no energy. Unlike when Finn and Poe literally ran across an airstrip to passionately embrace. --- Aeris dies if she takes more damage than her current HP - Panthera https://signavatar.com/26999_s.png ... Copied to Clipboard!
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mach25687 02/09/20 10:53:31 AM #72: |
Evening if they use this script I guarantee Star Wars fan's will still bitch on how bad it is.
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SpaceBear_ 02/09/20 11:20:07 AM #73: |
mach25687 posted...
Evening if they use this script I guarantee Star Wars fan's will still bitch on how bad it is. Good evening. How are you? --- - God bless, downtime and TheSlinja. YNWA GameFAQs' Favourite Sons. - Official Barman Of Champion Pub ... Copied to Clipboard!
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BakonBitz 02/09/20 11:55:37 AM #74: |
BLAKUboy posted...
There was the hug on Starkiller, but even that was more like an afterthought with no energy. Unlike when Finn and Poe literally ran across an airstrip to passionately embrace.Don't forget the time Finn asked Rey if she had a boyfriend. --- Game collection: http://www.backloggery.com/bakonbitz Gaming channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCwVQm69J7bGScbv3_50C0dA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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ViewtifulGrave 02/09/20 2:46:24 PM #75: |
BakonBitz posted...
Don't forget the time Finn asked Rey if she had a boyfriend.Because he wanted to know if she was single. --- You enjoy teaching high schoolers, and I'll enjoy creating my crappy manga. Let's see where we both are in a year. TheDoorMouse Update https://imgur.com/vz0c9xf ... Copied to Clipboard!
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DarthAragorn 02/09/20 3:13:58 PM #76: |
ViewtifulGrave posted...
BakonBitz posted...Don't forget the time Finn asked Rey if she had a boyfriend.Because he wanted to know if she was single. But he was clearly asking if she had a boyfriend so he could kill her and take the boyfriend. Duh. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Doom_Art 02/09/20 3:24:54 PM #77: |
I just assumed Finn would be bi in my StormPilot fantasies
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BLAKUboy 02/09/20 4:03:40 PM #78: |
Finn is little more than a lost and abused puppy who will follow anyone that gives him ear scritches.
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Doom_Art 02/09/20 11:53:38 PM #79: |
So Rey and Poe went to see some sort of force sensitive lady Poe knew of and she told her how to find Mortis and that she needs to go alone and a sacrifice is required or something
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Doom_Art 02/09/20 11:58:29 PM #80: |
Also this script leans pretty heavily into the whole "Finn is force sensitive" thing. There's been multiple instances of him or Rey reacting to stuff happening to the other from a distance
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Doom_Art 02/10/20 12:07:29 AM #81: |
POE
Rey. Get on the ship. Please. REY You have to leave this place. POE Im not leaving you. Rey knows what she has to do. Hates it. REY You will leave this place and go back to help the Resistance. POE Im not...dont do this... She approaches Poe. Delicately brushes her fingertips over his bleeding forehead. REY You will leave this place and go back to help the Resistance. Chewbacca HOWLS. POE No...you cant... Poe feels his mind slipping away from him. REY You will leave this place and go back to help the Resistance. Rey takes Poes face in her hands and KISSES HIM. When she pulls away, Poe looks distraught. Saddened. POE I...I have to leave this place. oh my god what --- Not removing this until Mega Man 64 is released on the Wii Virtual Console. Started on: 12/1/2009 https://imgur.com/mPvcy ... Copied to Clipboard!
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SSJGrimReaper 02/10/20 12:09:39 AM #82: |
stop posting this tumblr fanfiction tier garb
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Doom_Art 02/10/20 12:11:41 AM #83: |
SSJGrimReaper posted...
stop posting this tumblr fanfiction tier garbno i'm going to finish this probably not tonight but eventually --- Not removing this until Mega Man 64 is released on the Wii Virtual Console. Started on: 12/1/2009 https://imgur.com/mPvcy ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Darmik 02/10/20 12:12:38 AM #84: |
Here's a crazy thought that apparently no one in Disney ever considered for Episode 9.
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Doom_Art 02/10/20 12:14:56 AM #85: |
CHANCELLOR HUX
You think this is funny. Very well. Hux holds out his hand. Shuts his eyes, concentrating deep. ROSE Are you? Are you trying to use the Force on me? CHANCELLOR HUX Be quiet. ROSE Oh no, see...youre not special. I mean, at all. CHANCELLOR HUX Shut up! He calms his fury, restraining himself. CHANCELLOR HUX (CONT'D) We have other ways to extract information. Hux opens a blast door to reveal an ELECTRIC TORTURE DEVICE. New tech, built to work quickly. Rose braces for a more painful kind of defiance. This whole part of Hux's character arc is weird --- Not removing this until Mega Man 64 is released on the Wii Virtual Console. Started on: 12/1/2009 https://imgur.com/mPvcy ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Darmik 02/10/20 12:16:19 AM #86: |
Well if you knew the Force was real why wouldn't you try to use it
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Doom_Art 02/10/20 12:17:48 AM #87: |
Darmik posted...
Well if you knew the Force was real why wouldn't you try to use itI suppose it would be less silly on screen than how I'm imagining it. --- Not removing this until Mega Man 64 is released on the Wii Virtual Console. Started on: 12/1/2009 https://imgur.com/mPvcy ... Copied to Clipboard!
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au_gold 02/10/20 12:25:12 AM #88: |
That wouldve been played for laughs and it wouldve been awful.
Rey and Poe really makes me glad they didnt use this script. --- Let me talk to your mother. Get your mother please. ... Copied to Clipboard!
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stoltenberg11 02/10/20 12:32:21 AM #89: |
That romance angle is ultracringe. Most of the rest of it seems ok. Slightly better than what we got.
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sLaCkEr408___RJ 02/10/20 12:39:16 AM #90: |
Doom_Art posted...
The iron grip of the FIRST ORDER has spread to the farthest reaches of the galaxy. Only a few scattered planets remain unoccupied.I don't like this. The Republic vs Separatist were fighting over planets for a decade during the clone wars. First Order can take over 90% in a year? Nah ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Jeff AKA Snoopy 02/10/20 12:40:51 AM #91: |
sLaCkEr408___RJ posted...
I don't like this. The Republic vs Separatist were fighting over planets for a decade during the clone wars. First Order can take over 90% in a year? Nah Resistance literally put out a full alert asking for help and nobody answered. Nobody is stopping the First Order. Also didnt we establish it was decades later? --- ... Copied to Clipboard!
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IShall_Run_Amok 02/10/20 12:43:45 AM #92: |
dude did Rey just mind rape Poe
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Darmik 02/10/20 12:44:33 AM #93: |
sLaCkEr408___RJ posted...
I don't like this. The Republic vs Separatist were fighting over planets for a decade during the clone wars. First Order can take over 90% in a year? Nah The Force Awakens established that the New Republic didn't have an army. --- Kind Regards, Darmik ... Copied to Clipboard!
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BakonBitz 02/10/20 12:45:42 AM #94: |
IShall_Run_Amok posted...
dude did Rey just mind rape PoeHer own version of the Jedi mind trick. --- Game collection: http://www.backloggery.com/bakonbitz Gaming channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCwVQm69J7bGScbv3_50C0dA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Doom_Art 02/10/20 12:51:08 AM #95: |
So Finn is in the Coruscant underworld and has met up with some Resistance-aligned folks. One of them is a young guy with a Resistance ring.
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stoltenberg11 02/10/20 2:03:44 AM #96: |
Wait this movie is really decades in the future? Um how was that supposed to work with the actors?
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BakonBitz 02/10/20 4:18:38 AM #97: |
stoltenberg11 posted...
Wait this movie is really decades in the future? Um how was that supposed to work with the actors?At least one decade. Not sure how many. If it was several...yeah, I'm not sure. Digitally age them up? --- Game collection: http://www.backloggery.com/bakonbitz Gaming channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCwVQm69J7bGScbv3_50C0dA ... Copied to Clipboard!
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DrizztLink 02/10/20 4:19:10 AM #98: |
stoltenberg11 posted...
Wait this movie is really decades in the future? Um how was that supposed to work with the actors?Do you Do you not know about makeup --- ... Copied to Clipboard!
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Doom_Art 02/11/20 1:45:45 PM #99: |
It's more than likely 10 years
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Doom_Art 02/11/20 1:46:04 PM #100: |
I have the afternoon off so away we go with this wacky script again
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