Board 8 > Doctor Doom travels through Kanto with Doom: The Excellence of Electrocution.

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Dark Young Link
05/14/12 12:12:00 PM
#151:


^Are you implying that Doom's definition of "something awful" takes a back seat to anyone else's definition?

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05/14/12 12:12:00 PM
#152:


It's not like it matters. The Fantastic Four have as much chance against Doom in battle as they have in a pokemon battle: none.

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Achromatic
05/14/12 12:13:00 PM
#153:


Doom hasn't made the planet explode.

He's behaving well tbqh

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Achromatic
05/14/12 12:30:00 PM
#154:


Before I move on I'd just like to say that what started as a very silly writing project made on pure whimsy has actually gotten me to improve as a writer. This type of flash fiction where every entry almost demands something interesting to happen on every line is sometimes a challenge to do well. It might surprise some of you to know that many of the chapters in this are revised multiple times before I post them. Sometimes they are minor revisions, sometimes I look at whole paragraphs and realize they just don't live up to the standard of Doom. This is by far and away my most successful board project ever at 100 chapters now, not even including the few side stories and "Doom responds to the users" I've written. It is funny, writing this actually made me realize what I am truly talented at as a writer: Being villainous. It has given me direction in my writing that has surprised me.

It means a lot to me to know that a lot of people enjoy this, because I am going to make this my trade soon. This week has probably been the best week in my life with how many new and exciting opportunities I have been given. And those chances were given to me because I worked hard on writing about dead Naruto characters and now the glorious adventure of one Doctor Victor Von Doom. I think that might be a first.

I want to take a moment to thank the person on board 8 who has driven Doom the most over the past year and two months: Daranix. Most of you will barely recognize that name, if at all, but he is the person who tells me when my writing is not up to snuff and demands more out of me because he knows I am capable. I write Doom, but Daranix makes sure that I write Doom until it is right.

Thank you.

Sorry for spilling my guts a bit but geesh 100 updates you can take some of my sentimental crap.

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05/14/12 12:32:00 PM
#155:


Are you implying that Doom is capable of behaving in such a way that is inappropriate? Chris, the definition of appropriate changes with Doom's actions; they are appropriate no matter what they are because they are made by Doom.

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Achromatic
05/14/12 12:35:00 PM
#156:


Anagram you don't really know Doom as a character do you? He actually has a rigid sense of honor and morality about certain things. Doom has admitted to being in error before.

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05/14/12 1:29:00 PM
#157:


Achromatic posted...
Anagram you don't really know Doom as a character do you? He actually has a rigid sense of honor and morality about certain things. Doom has admitted to being in error before.

Aren't most of the errors he's admitted to things that he thought better of later on? How many times has he admitted to actually wronging someone?

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HanOfTheNekos
05/14/12 2:17:00 PM
#158:


Chris, curious - will you ever read the actually comics to get an idea of how Doom is written by other people?

I'm inclined to think not, as it might interfere with your own image of him. However, even though some people have said yours is accurate, some fans might find your Doom to be less than suitable?

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Achromatic
05/14/12 2:23:00 PM
#159:


From: HanOfTheNekos | #158
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Well I kind of view myself as a writer of Doom now without, you know, all of the prestige of working for Marvel. I think every writer has their own take on Doom and mine aims to be a bit over the top. I've read passing stuff about Doom though.

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Maniac64
05/14/12 3:41:00 PM
#160:


And those chances were given to me because I worked hard on writing about dead Naruto characters and now the glorious adventure of one Doctor Victor Von Doom. I think that might be a first.

That is certainly a unique resume.

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Rad Link 5
05/14/12 4:56:00 PM
#161:


I haven't read this in a while. Does Doctor Doom have a Houndoom yet?

I know it's Kanto. I don't care.

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GeneralKenobi85
05/14/12 5:03:00 PM
#162:


Actually, Houndoom only appeared in Kanto in both the original G/S/C and HG/SS. Same with Magcargo. They didn't appear in Johto at all despite being Gen II Pokemon.

So it's entirely possible for Doom to get a Houndoom.

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most_games_r_ok
05/14/12 5:07:00 PM
#163:


I prefer this over the top Doom tbh

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ViviffTheGreat
05/14/12 5:28:00 PM
#164:


I feel like this Doom is basically the personification of Doom's "prouder" traits. Take his most "fan-friendly' personality points and mannerisms and put those front and center while having a skeletal foundation of some of his other traits. I don't think "inaccurate" is the word, I think it's just an extreme, and one that fits well for this kind of story; It's Victor Von Doom's world tour of badassery, so you might as well put all of his badass traits front and center.

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beavis666x2
05/15/12 8:24:00 PM
#165:


Up

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Achromatic
05/15/12 10:07:00 PM
#166:


*looks at D3 screen for an hour*

*frowns*

Time to update Doom soon!

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Achromatic
05/17/12 5:33:00 AM
#167:


Update: I am writing this chapter and wanting to bang my own head against the wall at how bad it is. Whoo writing process.

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Dark Young Link
05/17/12 5:34:00 AM
#168:


A bad Doom chapter?

I find that hard to believe!

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Achromatic
05/17/12 5:37:00 AM
#169:


From: Dark Young Link | #168
A bad Doom chapter?

I find that hard to believe!


I would try my hardest to avoid a bad chapter ever making it to the board, but Daranix can tell you sometimes I need a change of direction.

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GenesisSaga
05/17/12 8:06:00 AM
#170:


All caught up! Despite your writing issues I'm positive this next update will be fantastic!

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most_games_r_ok
05/18/12 5:11:00 PM
#171:


Doom

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beavis666x2
05/19/12 8:25:00 PM
#172:


Doom lives.

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Dark Young Link
05/20/12 4:47:00 AM
#173:


Doom is eternal.

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Achromatic
05/21/12 2:42:00 AM
#174:


Doom more like Diablo.

Thank you, as always, for your continued patience while I lose my soul to Diablo 3. The worst is just about done though, so Doom should see more updates soon!

(Love Diablo III seriously)

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NewerShadow
05/22/12 2:36:00 AM
#175:


Doom is above the purge.

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kevwaffles
05/22/12 6:06:00 AM
#176:


Side chapter of Doom usurping Diablo?

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Kenshin171
05/23/12 7:29:00 AM
#177:


bump
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GenesisSaga
05/23/12 8:13:00 PM
#178:


Dump

(Doom + bump = dump, yes?)

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Achromatic
05/23/12 9:03:00 PM
#179:


Doctor Doom watched as Jonathan Storm stepped forward to be the first challenger. This didn’t surprise Doom, the boy was always the stupidest of his little group.

An achievement.

“So eager to be defeated, Mr. Storm? Very well. Doom welcomes your demise!”

Johnny snarled at Doom. “I see you are the same as ever, Doom. Always so arrogant and smug. You aren’t going to be that way for long. We have scoured the world for some of the rarest and most exotic species of Pokemon and have trained day and night for a week for this battle!”

“I have conquered worlds in less time! Do not be so proud to flaunt your futility at me, boy. Now start battling before I regale you with all of the horrible things I did to your sister in alternate timelines!”

Johnny paled at Doom’s implication. “Flame on!” Johnny screamed as he simultaneously turned into the human torch and flung a Pokeball. The Pokemon that appeared out of the ball was a giant orange dog with black markings all over its body.

”Arcanine, a Legendary Pokemon. Arcanine are known for their reckless stupidity, sometimes mistaken for bravery, as well as their loyalty to their masters. It is quite a strong Pokemon despite its personality flaw so it is suggested to brutally slaughter it to set the tone.”

Despite a rough start to its existence Doom was starting to like his new Pokedex invention more and more. Doom found that butchering things tended to set some sort of tone, one way or another, and tossed a Pokeball into the field of battle.

With a buzz Logan the Beedrill entered the battlefield for the first time since his grave injuries against Richards’ Zapdos. Logan swiped its metallic blades a few times and then set its sights on the Arcanine.

The Arcanine was not about to be scared of a bug and roared defiantly in the general direction of Doom and his Pokemon. Johnny smiled at his Pokemon, he too making the tragic mistake of confusing stupidity with bravery. “It is going to take more than bugs to win this battle, Doom! Arcanine, Flamethrower!”

“Destroy,” Doom ordered.

Logan blurred out of the way of the fire attack and charged directly at the Arcanine which had to take a step back to avoid getting impaled by one of Logan’s blades. It was not so diligent to avoid the second one, however. The Arcanine did not have time to register what was happening before the metallic blade cruelly ripped through the flesh of its neck with no regards for the life it was ending. As the blood spurted out of the neck, the now detached head fell from the dog Pokemon’s shoulders only for Logan to quickly spear it with his other blade and place it over its own head in a clear sign of triumph.

Doom was pleased to see Logan was getting into the spirit of competition.

“Let that be a lesson, Mr. Storm,” Doom said contemptuously. “Always keep your head in battle, lest you lose it permanently.”

Doom: 1
Fantastic Four: 0


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GenesisSaga
05/23/12 9:07:00 PM
#180:


Ooh!

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GenesisSaga
05/23/12 9:09:00 PM
#181:


=(

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Achromatic
05/23/12 9:10:00 PM
#182:


I think I give the most brutal deaths to the Pokemon I like more.

RIP Lapras and Arcanine.

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GenesisSaga
05/23/12 9:11:00 PM
#183:


Don't forget Snorlax!

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Achromatic
05/23/12 9:12:00 PM
#184:


Oh man, Snorlax too.

Not a good idea to be in my top 25 <_<

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GenesisSaga
05/24/12 8:03:00 AM
#185:


Doom updates and I'm the only one to comment?

UNACCEPTABLE!

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muddersmilk
05/24/12 8:07:00 AM
#186:


Logan is back!

But poor Arcanine.

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kevwaffles
05/24/12 8:11:00 AM
#187:


Don't lose your head, Johnny.

Or do. Whatever.

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_Regaro_
05/24/12 8:12:00 AM
#188:


This is going to be

Spectacular

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Kenshin171
05/24/12 9:33:00 PM
#189:


Can't wait for more Doom!
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Dark Young Link
05/24/12 9:58:00 PM
#190:


That wasn't a smart move, Arcanine. Bee seeing you.

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beavis666x2
05/25/12 3:01:00 PM
#191:


F*** yeah Doom.

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GenesisSaga
05/25/12 6:40:00 PM
#192:


RIP Arcanine! T_T

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Blairville
05/26/12 1:13:00 AM
#193:


I can't beelieve that happened! Oh wait, yes I can.

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Daranix
05/26/12 9:39:00 AM
#194:


I suppose I am obligated to post in here now.

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GenesisSaga
05/26/12 5:46:00 PM
#195:


I bet the Thing sends out a Golem

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GeneralKenobi85
05/26/12 5:48:00 PM
#196:


And Sue would get Mr. Mime perhaps?

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beavis666x2
05/27/12 4:50:00 PM
#197:


Doom will not fall.

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KingJawless
05/28/12 5:09:00 AM
#198:


A bug/steel beedrill defeats a fire dog?
A true testament to Doom's skills.

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most_games_r_ok
05/28/12 8:35:00 PM
#199:


More Doom

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BlackDra90n
05/29/12 6:27:00 AM
#200:


Le bump.

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