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Catching up on this now because I've somehow managed to miss it this entire time.

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Chapter Title Revealed!
Chapter 7: World Ruler Major Catastrophy

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Short Chapter 7 Preview:
Chris goes to search for SEP so he can get back at him. Meanwhile, WR Major Catastrophy heads out to find and kill Chris and SEP, and takes use of the people in town to do this. How will all this end up? New chapter this Thursday!

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Today's chapter will be posted later than usual. But you can be sure to expect it before 6PM EST at the latest. The reason is that I'm not home at the usual time today.

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Chapter 7 – World Ruler Major Catastrophy

”So, it seems like there's some ruckus in the city today,” Catastrophy told his men. “In some ways it's a catastrophe - but it also means I can have some fun. I need ten of you Lieutenants with me, and I don't care who. We're going right away.”
“Yes Major Catastrophy!” said all of the Major's Lieutenants.
“Right. It's been a while since I've played puppet master with the people in town. I'm looking forward to it.”

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“Dammit!” Chris yelled punching in the ground. “I couldn't beat that bastard! Those attacks were no joke, but I should've thought of something!”
“It's alright Chris, it doesn't matter if you beat him or not.” Crimson said in an attempt to cheer him up. Still though, this is exactly what I feared. You don't get far without a special ability. I had just hoped we could get peacefully to my town.
“Yeah I know, but he was killing innocent people who even admired him. I can't allow that!” Chris said, still pissed.
“Well, I guess this has changed your mind about making him join your team.”
“He would've been a really cool addition though, you saw what a great fighter he was... but you're right. Damn. If you had just pulled out your breasts like I said, that would've totally worked!”
Why you little...! Crimson took a breath. ...This is not the time to be pissed Crimson. Calm down. He simply can't understand that what he's saying is... completely unacceptable! “Well Chris, when he killed innocent people it was made clear to us that he's a different kind of revolutionary. Sure, he's opposing the WR, but he's pretty much just opposing anyone but himself.” Crimson said.
“Yeah, that's true.” Chris replied.
“You'll need to find someone who's interested in the same kind of revolution as you and I.” Crimson said.
“Me and you?” Chris asked looking up for the first time.
“Umm, well you know, I'm supporting the way you're doing it...” Crimson said. Chris looked at her for a few seconds. “So, let's get out of here, Chris, shall we?”
“I don't wanna leave here before I've gotten back at SEP.” He said.
“What!? Are you kidding, he was just about to kill you, let's get away from this place!”
“Look, I'm thankful that you saved me, giving me time to think things through, but I have my way of doing things. There's no way I can be aiming for the top, if there's someone I can't beat. Therefore this is not over yet. That's my code as a revolutionary.”
“Well, I guess I have to respect that," Crimson said. What trouble I've gotten into. Would have been much easier if I didn't run into Chris. Crimson then realized Chris had already run off. “Hold on!” She tried yelling with no succes.

Catastrophy was not often out in public. His mere presence scared the townsfolk. “Listen everyone! A catastrophic catastrophe has occurred! Two people in this town needs to be taken care of. Of course I could do it myself, but I figured it would better to share the fun with all of you!” Catastrophy looked at the people around him. “Hey, give me the report on the two rulebreakers.” He whispered to one of the lieutenants.
“Here you go sir.”
“Right. One of them is a pretty tall and muscular man with black hair. He's carrying a long sword on his back. He can attack from distance with that sword, so be careful. There's not really any way you can mistake him.” Catastrophy said. “The other one isn't quite as tall. But while he might be small, you can still see that he's got quite a few muscles as well. He has dark brown hair, and is very easygoing. Right now he's got scars all over, and his clothes have been ruined a bit, so it shouldn't be hard finding him either. He may not look like much, but he's got some great moves, apparently.” Catastrophy said explaining Chris. “Now go out there and kill them, or I'll kill you!

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The people went out looking for them, motivated by fear. Deep down, though, they were all hoping not to run into either of them - they knew it would be a hopeless mismatch.

Damn, who was that flying chick who saved the freak? SEP thought, standing alone in the battle area, as every person there had either evacuated or accidentally been killed by SEP's attacks. Well, he can consider himself lucky. I'm not gonna bother to go looking for him. I'm kinda tired though. I'll just take a nap right here, looks peaceful.
SEP then laid on the ground fast asleep, not knowing that a bunch of people were looking to kill him. The townsfolk were getting close to him.
“Damn, what do we do, there's no way we can kill those guys.”
“It had been quite some time since that Major did something. It was almost peaceful living here.”
“I know right? But then those two had to start a big fight.”
“We're really gonna die here.”
“Unless they're like sleeping when we find them, there's just no way.”

“Umm, isn't that one of them sleeping over there?” Everyone was silent for a moment.
“WHAAAAAT!?” They all yelled, but luckily SEP stayed asleep.
“This can't be.”
“How can he even be sleeping like that!?”
“This is the perfect chance to kill him, maybe the Major won't kill us after all!"
“I've got a knife here. Go stab him in the heart someone. Who wants to do it?” Nobody answered. “Come on guys, I brought the knife, so it can't be me.”
“Actually that's why it should be you!”
“What did you say!?”
“Give me the knife, we're wasting time.” The guy took the knife and got ready to stab SEP. “Here goes nothing.” He said as he aiming the knife towards SEP's heart while closing his eyes. He opened them again realizing his hands had been stopped. "****,” muttered the townsperson, opening his eyes.

SEP, wide awake, had gotten hold of the guy's arm. “I can't even sleep peacefully these days. You guys want to kill me?” SEP said, pissed. No one had the guts to speak to him. “Well, here's what you get for waking me up.” SEP pulled out his sword with his free hand. “Die!” He screamed, cutting the guy's head off. He smiled sickeningly, licking the blood off the sword. “Now for the rest of you.” SEP launched into a rampage, mercilessly killing everyone around him. The ones that ran away got slaughtered by his wind slash attacks. “There's nothing you can do when I'm in this mood! Die! Every single one of you! Fear me! Fear my sword! It's the best you can find out there! I call it Centwaur!"
SEP continued the onslaught, ruthlessly murdering the townsfolk, when suddenly he heard a familiar voice.
“Stop you psychopathic bastard!”
SEP turned around and saw a familiar face. “Oh, it's you from before, what was the name?” SEP said.
“Chris”
“You never learn, do you?” SEP said, turning towards Chris. His eyes narrowed.

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My character sure does love saying anything related to catastrophes. Can not wait for next weeks chapter.

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catastrophy15 posted...

My character sure does love saying anything related to catastrophes. Can not wait for next weeks chapter.

inb4 you say when you show up for the obvious end arc boss fight

"Things are about to get....CATASTROPHIC!!!!"

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Good ol' Centwaur.

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So, how are you all liking this so far?

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Well, I for one am enjoying this.

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From: JeffreyRaze | #118
Well, I for one am enjoying this.
That.

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Caught up again, really good so far.

Is Chris supposed to be reminiscent of Monkey D. Luffy? Cause he really is.

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Yup, he has been partly inspired by him.

Serveral of my characters are inspired by one or more other fictional characters.

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Alright, just curious since I was getting definite early Luffy vibes.

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Glad you noticed. Though, that one shouldn't be very hard.

Chapter Title Revealed!
Chapter 8: How To Defeat The Wind Slash Attacks

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Short Chapter 8 Preview:
Chris finds SEP again, ready for round 2. SEP sees at as a waste of time with his ability, but Chris seems to have "figured" a good way to beat it. Has he really? Who's gonna be victorious? And what about the people in town having been ordered to kill them? This Thursday people!

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There's a new chapter tomorrow at noon.

Aww yeah.

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Chapter 8 – How To Defeat The Wind Slash Attacks.

“It's pretty simple. How can I become the revolutionary to take down the WR if I can't even beat some piece of **** like you?!” Chris said.
“How can you become the revolutionary to take down the WR when you don't even have a special ability?” SEP replied.
“It doesn't matter.” Chris said sounding confident. “I can beat you this time.”
“Are you fooling yourself, or have you actually figured something out?” SEP said curiously.
“Find out yourself.” Chris said and started running towards SEP. This is a risk, but it should work.

SEP started launching his wind slash attacks against Chris just like last time. Chris attempted to dodge them without slowing down. That didn't stop SEP, though, and as Chris came closer he started getting hit the same way as before.
“What are you doing!?” SEP asked.
“I'm not giving up!” Chris said still running towards SEP. As he got very close, SEP's attacks started landing direct hits. However, Chris didn't stop. He continued to run towards SEP, even though he was in pain, and then...
“What the ****!?” SEP said shocked. “You're way too reckless!” Chris had gotten hold of SEP's sword. Blood was dripping from his body. Then he looked up at SEP with a very serious expression.
“Don't you dare think you could ever defeat me!” Chris said.

They both had hold of the sword and tried taking it away from each other. SEP was surprised at Chris' strength, being shorter and nowhere near as broad as SEP was. However, SEP had the edge; he was pulling it upright so that Chris would not be able to reach it. Desperately struggling, Chris came up with a new plan.
“Take this, you bastard!” Chris yelled as he jumped, while still holding the sword as tight as he could. Then he swung towards SEP and kicked him in his stomach. Chris got he feet back on the ground and pulled the sword towards himself - SEP couldn't keep his hold of it any longer. SEP laid on the ground.
“That's it then.” Chris said. “Without this sword, you can't use your special ability. Am I right?”
SEP looked at him, angrily.
“I take that as a yes.” Chris concluded. “I may not be the best at wielding swords, but you're defenseless.”

Chris lifted his sword, ready to slice SEP open. But suddenly he stopped in midair.
“ARGH!” Chris yelled.
One of the townspeople had picked up the knife they attempted to kill SEP with and had stabbed Chris in back. His idea was to hit the heart, but he was so nervous that his arm was shaking too much, and thus he didn't hit accurately.
“I... I'm sorry.” The guy said, still shaking in fear. “Our lives depended on this.” He then pulled the knife back out. For a moment Chris didn't move, then he dropped the sword and turned around.
“What the hell are you doing?!” Chris yelled. The man was shaking even more, as he was shocked that Chris was alive.
“Please don't kill me! I didn't want to. I didn't have a choice. We were ordered to do this.” He said. Then a wind slash attack landed a fatal blow on him, as it hit his throat. Chris turned around. SEP had picked up his sword.
“Who were you trying to hit there?” Chris asked. Blood was dripping down from his back.
“Him. I don't miss targets when they're that close.” SEP replied.

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“I thought so too, but you could have killed me there and ended the fight.” Chris said.
“I could indeed, but that goes against my principles.” SEP said. “You have been a strong opponent. Attacking you from the back wouldn't be honorable. That's the code I follow as a proud swordsman.”
“I do like the sound of that code, and not just because it saved my life.” Chris said with a little smile. “However... why the hell are you killing this guy?! And all the others you killed before for that matter?!”
“Hmpf, they started it. They tried killing me while I was sleeping.” SEP said.
“And you didn't you even look into the situation!?” Chris yelled. “Hey everyone, that guy said he was taking orders when trying to take my life. Apparently, you also wanted to take SEP's life. Who ordered you?”
“Those people are too dumb to communicate with. If they were smart, they would've waited until one of us, presumably you, had been killed by the other.” SEP mumbled.
“Well, you were sleeping and I wasn't paying attention to them, dumbass!” Dammit, this wound in my back really hurts. I'm ot sure I can fight much longer.
“It was Catastrophy!” Some girl among the crowd yelled. Chris and SEP looked at her paying attention. “World Ruler Major Catastrophy.”

“You damn people are actually doing it!?” SEP said. In a fit of anger, he sent wind slash attacks toward the place she was - killing her and several others around her. Chris took the sword out of his hands and threw it away.
“What did you do that for!?” he screamed. “You damn moron! Stop killing all those people!”
“You wanna be next!?” SEP yelled back.
“CHRIIIIIIIIIIS!” The two of them stopped yelling at each other and looked around. Then they spotted Crimson walking towards them. “Why the hell do you keep fooling around!? Look at how ruined this place has become!” She then knocked Chris in the head. “Whoa, you're hurt pretty badly. What happened?”
Chris was about to answer, but was interrupted.
“Hey blonde, you're that flying ***** that saved him before right?” SEP asked. Crimson slapped him, too.
“You're part of this chaos as well!” She yelled.
“You want me to kill you too!?” SEP yelled.
“Hey, you're fighting me!” Chris said and punched him in the stomach. SEP fell to the ground.
“That hurt!” SEP yelled.
“How can you even take each other seriously.” Crimson mumbled.

Suddenly, there was a voice. “Foolish townspeople. I'll have you all executed.”
“Who's there?” Chris said.
“Looks like I'll have to deal with you guys myself.” The voice said.
“Who're you?” SEP asked, without bothering getting up from the ground.
“Me? Why I am the great Major Catastrophy of the WR!”

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Get hyped for next week. That is when the fighting this arc truly comes!

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I've been meaning to ask this but what do each of the characters look like?

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From: catastrophy15 | #133

I've been meaning to ask this but what do each of the characters look like?

Good question! I have only been giving small hints at some of them haven't I? Then here's some information about the looks of the characters that has appeared in present time. That means you'll have to wait with Cobain, Nick, Foolmo, ExTha and Wigs until some other time.

-Chris:
About 1,7 meters tall. He has fairly short dark brown hair and brown eyes. Quite muscular even though he's small in size. He prefers to wear t-shirts and shorts that goes just below the knees. He has black running shoes, and either black or white tennis socks.

-Crimson:
About 1,75 meters tall. She has blue eyes and blond hair that almost reaches halfway down her back. She's thin and her breast size is an F-cup. She has no specific preferences in clothes but they're usually fairly revealing.

-Gravy:
About 1,9 meters tall. He has short light hair and brown eyes. He's very thin hasn't gotten much muscle, so his clothes are pretty loose.

-SEP:
About 1,9 meters tall. Short black hair and brown eyes. Very muscular but still far from body-builder size, as SEP has focused solely on actual muscles instead of size in his training. SEP wears military pants and black boots. He has a black and tight undershirt.

-Catastrophy:
About 2 meters tall. He has light brown hair and brown eyes. If his hair was all smooth it would reach his shoulders, but it's quite thick. He wears the WR Major uniform even when not on duty.

That should give you an idea.

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I like this actually. I should do one of those near the end of every arc. I don't want to include it in the chapters other than influencing stuff like Chris not looking very strong and him trying to accomplish stuff with the help of Crimson's huge breasts.

Also, if anyone of you got any "behind the scenes" questions, I'll be more than happy to answer. Like "Why did I do that?" "Why did I choose that b8er to be that character?" etc.

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So, what's the general about on the current arc?

It's far from one of the big ones, and personally not among the ones I was most excited about writing, but it has still been enjoyable. And also, every arc will have its own importance and this is no exception.

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(3:58:46 AM) Yadomi Jinta: ctes looks like Zoro from One Piece

So, what's the general opinion on the current arc?

It's far from one of the big ones, and personally not among the ones I was most excited about writing, but it has still been enjoyable. And also, every arc will have its own importance and this is no exception.

Yeah, reposted this because I apparently couldn't type.

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I'm liking it and hoping I'm going to be one of those recurring villains from most games, movies, books, etc.

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Chapter Title Reavled!
Chapter 9 - The Pressure Grows. Battling Against a WR Major!

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i finally caught up on this

good job so far

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Short Preview on Chapter 9:
Catastrophy joins the battle himself and reveals his ability. He attacks SEP at first, because of Chris is quite injured already, but Chris insists on being the one to fight him. Lieutenants are also there and everyone, even Crimson, is forced to fight.

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Chapter 9 – The Pressure Grows. Battling Against a WR Major.

“So, you're a major catastrophe of the WR? Does that mean you're a revolutionary!?” Chris asked, confused.
“Chris, he has a WR uniform. Though if he's a major catastrophe of the WR then he must suck big time.” SEP said.
“Major is a WR rank you idiots!” Crimson yelled, frustrated.
“Whoa, that's like the highest rank then, right? Since it's major.” Chris asked.
“Alright enough with the puns.” Crimson said. “No, the Three Leaders of the World are the highest ranked. Then there's the Generals, Brigadiers, Colonels and then Majors. After that there's only the Lieutenants.”
“Second to last rank. He really does suck big time.” SEP said.
“Well, the amount of Lieutenants are much higher than the amount of every other rank combined. Being promoted from Lieutenant means that's you're something special. You also have to have a well controlled special ability in order to get that promotion.”
“Good thing there's a blonde chick to give us information.” SEP mumbled.
Chris has heard. “I do have a name you know.” She said.
“But I don't know it.” SEP replied.
“My name is Crimson.”
“I didn't say I wanted to know.” SEP said.
“Hey! We're kinda in a battle here, so stop chatting.” Chris said. I can't fight this guy and SEP afterwards. I hope Crimson can take down one of them.
Crimson yelled, annoyed. “Did you even listen to... oh.” She then noticed that Chris was fighting some lieutenants.
“We gotta help!” Crimson said.
“You guys sound so pathetic.” Catastrophy said. “But it's time to show you that I really am a major catastrophe!”
“Didn't we make enough puns already...” Crimson mumbled and flew up the air.

Catastrophy took a small breath out. Then starting breathing in really hard, while turning in SEP's direction.
“Whoa!” SEP said as he was pulled towards Catastrophy. “What the hell!” SEP attempted to run away, but the wind Catastrophy created was impressive to say the least.
“****. Good thing I have Centwaur!” SEP drew his sword and plunged it into the ground, holding it tightly. “Damn, didn't expect you to literally suck big time.” Catastrophy stopped breathing in.
“Centwaur. What's that?” Catastrophy asked SEP.
“Why that is my amazing sword.” SEP said.
“Back off, SEP!” Chris yelled.
“What now!? Aren't you half dead already?” SEP asked.
“I wanna beat this guy! Beating you can wait! He's the WR Major after all.” Chris said.
“You're insane.” SEP said, and backed off, as he really didn't care.
“Crimson! Take care of these Lieutenants for me!” Chris yelled.
“Me!? Wait, what about SEP?” Crimson asked.
“He's an honorable man.” Chris replied. “He wont try anything dirty.” Chris then cracked his knuckles. “You better be ready. This is going to be catastrophic.”
“No more puns!” Crimson yelled.”

Chris charged towards Catastrophy. He got ready to fire a punch. Catastrophy took a breath in and then blew against Chris, causing him to fall over. Chris stumbled, but quickly got back up again.
“That wound is too bad for you to do anything.” Catastrophy said, chuckling somewhat.
Ge started breathing in. Chris was being pulled towards him.
Damn him. Chris thought, as he got closer as closer.
“Things really are about to get catastrophic... for you!” Catastrophy said. Then he punched Chris so hard that blood flew out of him from all sides. Catastrophy started breathing in again, and did the exact same thing.
I gotta think of something. Chris thought groggily as he lay bloodily on the ground.

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Great, Chris is dying and I'm stuck with 10 lieutenants against me. What to do!? How do I get out of this!? Crimson thought, as she panicked.
“Crimson! Pick me up and fly up in the air!” SEP yelled. “There's a way to make this very easy.”
“Why would I trust you?” Crimson asked.
“What choice do you have, you fool.” SEP said.
“...Fine.” Crimson said. She grabbed SEP and flew up.
“Alright, don't lose me.” SEP said and started to fire wind slash attacks against the lieutenants. They sliced them down one after another. “See? That's how you use a talent like swinging your arms fast to good use!”
“Nice, although...” Crimson said. I gotta count again.
“I'll help Chris now, or he's seriously gonna die.” SEP said and went towards the Major.

He only killed nine of them! I'm pretty sure there was ten. Crimson thought.
Just then, the tenth lieutenant came running towards her with a knife. “****, SEP a little help!”
SEP didn't react to her.
“Alright, you're dead now!” The lieutenant yelled, getting ready to attack her.
“EEEEHH!” Crimson screamed. Reflexively she managed to grab his hand that was holding the knife. She had closed her eyes in fear. When she opened them again, she started screaming once more.
“Shut up and die!” The lieutenant yelled. Although she was nervous, she did her best to hold him back. But the guy was stronger than her.
What do I do!? What do I do!? What do I do!? Crimson was panicking more than ever. I got it! She took hold of his other hand and started flying up in the air.
“What are you doing!” He yelled. She flew a good amount of meters up in air, to make sure he wouldn't survive a fall.
Then she let go of him.
As the lieutenant fell, he managed to slash at her, causing a severe scar in her left thigh. “Argh!” Crimson screamed. However she managed to stay in the air.
“Damn you!” The lieutenant yelled as he fell, hitting the ground with an almost comical “splat”.
All this effort and I only took down one. SEP took down nine with no problems... it doesn't really surprise me though. She landed again and laid down on the ground. It's not like I can help anyways. I don't even feel like I can stand on two legs.

SEP ran towards Catastrophy, who had punched Chris countless times, and fired a wind slash attack against him. Catastrophy quickly stopped breathing Chris close to him, for who knows what time, and instead breathed out in SEP direction sending the attack right back at him. It hit SEP in the stomach and he fell down on his back.
What insane lungs. SEP thought. Something tells me he's not smoking.
Catastrophy then pointed a knife towards Chris and said; “Enough with the torture now. I'll finish you off.” He started breathing in and Chris was getting closer and closer to Catastrophy's extended knife.

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(Maniac64 at work)
All the proteins, vitamins, and carbs of your grandma's best turkey dinner, plus 15% alcohol.

My power is super breath huh. Sounds great though it does have flaws in my opinion.

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My favorite song as of now: http://soundcloud.com/thelivingtombstone/tombstonediscord
My bunnyslug: http://img.imgcake.com/nio/catapngzu.png

Many powers have that (evening bump).

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2002-2010 R.I.P Noble Nine we miss ya ;_;
07/28/02-12/13/09 R.I.P CATS we miss ya ;_;

Up

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Presenting a great man. The one and only of his kind. Dudes and dudettes, it's an honor to give you... CTES... umm... well... oh whatever.

up (final save my user contest needs to go up ctes)

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http://img.imgcake.com/kcftabletpnget.png

Chapter Title Revealed:
Chapter 10 - Chris and SEP vs. Catastrophy

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2002-2010 R.I.P Noble Nine we miss ya ;_;
07/28/02-12/13/09 R.I.P CATS we miss ya ;_;