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muddersmilk
07/16/12 4:18:00 PM
#151:


That is a shocking chapter title.

>_>

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ctesjbuvf
07/16/12 4:52:00 PM
#152:


Yeah, I really thought a lot about that one...

Anyways,

Short Preview of Chapter 10:
The fight between Chris and Catastrophy continues, with SEP acting as backup. Both sides wont give up and continues to pull out new tricks, as the fight reaches its climax.

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ctesjbuvf
07/17/12 4:05:00 PM
#153:


Get hype!

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catastrophy15
07/18/12 4:45:00 PM
#154:


I hate that I'm not going to be at home until sometime Monday and have to wait to read the next chapter.

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ctesjbuvf
07/18/12 4:57:00 PM
#155:


When are you leaving?

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ctesjbuvf
07/19/12 4:24:00 PM
#156:


Chapter 10 – Chris and SEP vs. Catastrophy

“Chris you dumbass, dodge that!” SEP yelled. However, Chris knew he couldn't.
He was drawn irresistably closer and closer to Catastrophy's extended knife.
“Bwahahahaha! How catastrophic. The battle is already over.” Catastrophy said.
Just before reaching the knife, Chris turned around and raised himself a bit. Then the knife hit him.
“CHRIS!” SEP and Crimson both yelled desperately.
“It's officially over!” Catastrophy said. “I was planning to slice you a bit, but it seems like I've hit your heart. Now for that swordsman.”
Catastrophy pulled the knife out again and turned to SEP. SEP struggled to get up.
“Damn you.” SEP said. “There's no way I'll let you beat me too.”
“Is that so?” Catastrophy said. “There's also no way you can beat me. What do you supp-” He was interrupted by a solid punch to the face.
“As I said before, you're fighting me!”
“Chris!” Catastrophy said, shocked. “But I just killed you.”
“Nope! And you barely did any additional damage to me either.” Chris said.
“Nonsense! How's that possible!” Catastrophy said, still lying on the ground. “I stabbed you in the heart!”

“No, you didn't. You were pretty close though. Some guy from this town also thought he had killed me, when he hit that exact same spot with his knife.” Chris explained.
“Don't tell me... you purposely made me hit that spot.” Catastrophy said. He got back on his feet again.
“Sure did.” Chris said, without bragging. “It may have been dangerous, but it was the only way out.”

“Damn. Now that sure is catastrophic, but either way, there's no way I'll let that happen twice!” Catastrophy said and started breathing in. Chris was being pulled towards him.
“SEP!” Chris yelled.
“I know dumbass!” SEP said. He fired a few wind slash attacks and got in position to defend.
“Nice try.” Catastrophy said. He then breathed out, sending the wind slash attacks back against SEP. He easily deflected them though.
“Got you!” Chris yelled as he punched Catastrophy square in the face. Catastrophy flew a few meters back before hitting the ground.
“Why you!” Catastrophy said and got back up.
“Ready for round 2 SEP?” Chris asked.
“You bet.” SEP replied.
“It's not gonna work again.” Catastrophy said.

Catastrophy then started doing something...odd. So odd that it is almost impossible to describe.
“He's probably just trying to confuse us.” Chris said.
“Perhaps. But he really does look creepy doing that.” SEP said.
Catastrophy stopped.
“Alright. This is a bit... supernatural, but it works. One lung for each function.” Catastrophy said. “If you thought things were catastrophic before, then there are no words to describe what I'm about to do.
Catastrophy then started breathing in while turning in Chris' direction. Chris was once again being pulled towards him.
“I thought so. Go, SEP!” Chris said.
“Stop telling me what to do!” SEP yelled, and fired several wind slash attacks. However, things didn't exactly go as they has planned. Catastrophy started breathing out in SEP's direction, but didn't stop pulling Chris in. SEP blocked the first few of the incoming attacks, but when he realized that Chris was still being pulled in, he lost his focus and was hit several times. SEP fell to the ground, and was pushed even longer away.

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ctesjbuvf
07/19/12 4:25:00 PM
#157:


“SEP!” Chris yelled. As he was being pulled closer. This time, I'm done for.
Catastrophy pulled out the knife again. He got ready to slice Chris. However, something hit his hand and he lost his grip of the knife.
“What the **** now!?” Catastrophy yelled. He punched Chris away in frustration instead, so that he would still get some damage. “You bastard!”
Catastrophy realized that it was SEP who had used a long, thin branch to send a wind slash attacks quick enough to go through the storm, that Catastrophy had created. Of course, wind slash attacks from a branch did a pitiful amount of damage - but the surprise was enough to ensure Catastrophy still lost the knife.
“Alright, I'm sorry Chris, but I have to end this now.” SEP said, and picked up his sword again. He ran towards the major. Catastrophy breathing out in his direction once more. SEP attempted to get around it, and while it seemed impossible, he was actually getting closer.
Catastrophy was quick to realize this though, and breathed in towards a nearby building, that was in ruins from the battle SEP and Chris had previously. Some small pieces of the stone walls starting flying towards Catastrophy. Right before they hit him, he stopped breathing in, ducked, and blew them towards SEP.
SEP was quick on the move and was able to block a bit of them using his sword, but Catastrophy's storm made it impossible to block them all.

SEP was being pummelled by bits of rubble continuously until he passed out. He lost his sword and was pushed further into a wall - that collapsed on him when he hit it.
“You guys really were a catastrophe.” Catastrophy said. “However, I'm the major catastrophe! Bwahahaha!”

This can't be. Crimson thought. What have I gotten myself into. I can't believe they're both down.
“Stop laugh-” Chris tried talking, but coughing up blood stopped him. He had picked up SEP's sword.
“Oh? But you're so laughable!” Catastrophy said. “I must admit your stamina is quite amazing, but in the end there's just nothing you can do!”
He started breathing in and Chris was being pulled towards him. However, while keeping focus, Chris raised the sword. Catastrophy quickly realized that pulling him towards him was a bad idea, and breathing out instead. Chris plunged the sword in the ground and held it tightly. Chris pulled it up so he could get closer, but it didn't work as he was being pushed back before he could get closer. Instead he quickly plunged it into the ground again.

Alright, if that wont work... Chris was quick to get a new idea. He took off the remains of his shirt and tied it to the sword, all while keeping hold of it. Then he grabbed the end of the shirt instead and took a step forward.
He then pulled it up and quickly swung it above him and into the ground in front of him. He struggled his way past the sword again, and did the same thing once more. He continued to do this, and, eventually, got close to Catastrophy.
Catastrophy panicked as Chris got closer, and threw his knife at Chris. It hit him in the stomach, and he fell next to the sword. Catastrophy stopped breathing in.
“Finally!” He said and turned his head around. However, suddenly the sword went right through his own stomach. He turned around again and looked at Chris standing up, the knife still protruding from his stomach.
“What?” Catastrophy managed to say before Chris jumped up and landed a huge, flying punch to Catastrophy's head.

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ctesjbuvf
07/19/12 4:42:00 PM
#158:


bump

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ctesjbuvf
07/20/12 4:07:00 PM
#159:


I think this might have been the most enjoyable chapter for me to write. Except maybe the first one.

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KCF0107
07/21/12 4:58:00 PM
#160:


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ctesjbuvf
07/22/12 4:28:00 PM
#161:


Two chapter titles revealed!
Chapter 11 - The Battle is over. SEP explains his past.
Chapter 12 - The Tragedy is Revealed. There's still light ahead!

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JeffreyRaze
07/22/12 4:57:00 PM
#162:


Two chapter titles?

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ctesjbuvf
07/23/12 4:05:00 PM
#163:


Short Preview on Chapter 11:
The battle with Catastrophy finally ends. Crimson thinks they can leave the town now, but Chris has another thing on his mind. He's interested in what made SEP become the kind of person he is.

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catastrophy15
07/23/12 4:22:00 PM
#164:


Finally back and the flaws I noticed were exploited but I didn't realize that each lung controlled the parts of my abilities.

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ctesjbuvf
07/23/12 4:28:00 PM
#165:


Yeah, as I previously said, most abilities have flaws, though some are much easier noticed than others. As someone who hasnt found his own ability, Chris has to take advantage of those flaws.

As a Major, Catastrophy does have good control of his ability and he does know how to use it well, but in his case he relied on it too much most of all, and he still needs to fix some issues with his battling techniques. Perhaps a defeat will make him realize that?

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muddersmilk
07/23/12 4:30:00 PM
#166:


I actually read the last chapter awhile ago but the ending was pretty abrupt so I thought there might be more.

I fun and crazy battle though.

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ctesjbuvf
07/24/12 4:42:00 PM
#167:


Here's some cool background information on Catastrophy's ability!:

Normally, the lungs work together but he can split them far apart. This is what Chris and SEP thought looked creepy. Each lung can't do the same thing. One has to do the opposite of the other, although he can have one of them breathing like a normal human would.

Splitting his lungs also makes his breathing weaker. This is why they're able to get slowly closer to him. Also part of the reason to why SEP could shoot through the wind that was pushing him. It takes time for him to put his lungs in place, so he couldn't do that in the middle of the battle.

Also, splitting his lungs hurts his health in general, so it's a risky move, only to be used to tight situations.

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XIII_rocks
07/24/12 4:47:00 PM
#168:


Sweet

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KCF0107
07/25/12 4:49:00 PM
#169:


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ctesjbuvf
07/26/12 4:01:00 PM
#170:


Chapter 11 – The Battle is over. SEP explains his past.

After Chris had landed a flying punch into Catastrophy's face, he kicked SEP's sword that he had plunged through Catastrophy's stomach earlier all the way through his back. The Major fell to the ground unconscious. Chris picked up SEP's sword.
“You did it Chris!” Crimson was suddenly able to stand up again.
“Yeah...” Chris said, with a low voice. Then he yelled; “Listen up all you people that were keeping an eye on the fight! I know you're hiding around here somewhere. The next time some WR guy orders you to do something, don't! Revolutionize like me instead! Also, remember that I'll be the one to take down all of the WR!”
Some of the lurking townspeople started to get closer.
“We... we're very grateful that you-”
“Yeah, yeah. Without me here nothing would have happened right?” Chris said, interrupting the man. Chris then walked away.
“We'll remember you...” The guy mumbled.
“We should get going.” Crimson said. “I have some stuff to treat the wounds in my car.”
“Thanks, but one more thing first.” Chris said, and walked away.
“What more could you possibly want here!?” Crimson said, frustrated. Then she followed him.

Chris walked over to the ruins SEP was buried under. He lifted and pushed some stones away. Then he picked up SEP and got him out from the mess.
“SEP! Wake up!” Chris said.
“Take it easy!” Crimson told him. “He has taken quite a bit damage you know.” Though SEP did in fact awaken.
“Chris?” SEP said.
“You OK?" Chris asked and gave him his sword back.
“Whatever. You better have killed that damn Major!” SEP said.
“Well, I defeated him. He's hurt pretty badly and he's not waking up for a while.”
“That means he's still alive!?” SEP yelled.
“Yeah, I can't just kill him.” Chris said.
“Then move it, dumbass. I'm gonna slaughter him to end this completely.” SEP said. He tried to walk past Chris, but Chris blocked the way.
“No you're not!” Chris said.
“What!?”
“If we kill him then we're no better than he is!” Chris said.
“What the hell are you talking about!?” SEP asked, angry. “Of course we should kill him!”
“Don't you think you've killed enough people in this town already!?” Chris said.
“They started it! You wanna die too!?” SEP said, and got up in Chris' face.
“You two better not fight again!” Crimson screamed. It was a deep, guttural scream, a sound unlike any that had emanated from her body so far. She slapped them both. They both put their hands to their heads and turned their backs to each other.
“...Right.” Chris said.
“Stupid dumb blonde...” SEP mumbled.
“Did you say something!?” Crimson said, slapping him once more.
“I got it! Stop that!" SEP yelled.
“So SEP...” Chris said. “It's obvious you've been through some rough times...”
“What are you talking about?” SEP asked.
“You're very cold blooded. You murder people left and right. You don't seem to care about anyone's life. What happened man?” Chris asked.
“Hmm? ...Whatever. It's a long dumb story. You wouldn't bother listening to all of that.” SEP said.
“What if I do bother?” Chris asked.
“Well... alright then.” SEP said. “Twelve years ago...”

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ctesjbuvf
07/26/12 4:01:00 PM
#171:


***

Twelve years prior, a young boy named SEP, 9, was living in a town not too far away from Efortsatak. It was called Wutrance Town. Usually not much was going on, but on this day, the city was under attack.
“Brigadier Pj Basis, a small group of revolutionaries is here!” A lieutenant said.
“Is that so? Well, that should kill some time. Who is it?” Pj asked.
“We don't know yet sir. I don't think it's someone we've seen before.”
“Really? Well, then it might not kill as much time.” Pj said, disappointed.

There were more explosions than a Michael Bay movie.
“Mom! Dad has been hit, he said he's not gonna live!” A young SEP said. He was crying while hugging his mother as tight as he could.
“Don't worry son.” His mother said. She was also crying, even though she was trying not to. “We'll make it through this.”
“A revolutionary has come to our rescue!” Some man yelled. “He will fight for us.”
“Mom?” SEP looked up. “What's a revolutionary?”
“Well they're people who are against the WR and everything they stand for.” She replied.
“So then they'll help us right?” SEP asked, with a glimpse of hope in his eyes.
“I'm sure that they will at least fight that brigadier.” SEP's mom said and smiled.

“Oh, great, a revolutionary. What's your name?” Some woman asked the one of the two revolutionaries that were walking in front.
“Bartz. Though you might as well call me King Bartz already.” He said, without looking at her.
“Ye-... Yes! Great King Bartz! We wish you the best of luck in this battle!” The woman said, happy. The two moved on without responding.

***

“At that moment, I thought we had been saved.” SEP said, back in present time. “Revolutionaries. They sounded like heroes.”
“I have a question before you go on.” Chris said. “Bartz you say... is this guy still alive today?”
“He sure does. He's one of the greatest revolutionaries out there. At first I was surprised that your town didn't know him, but I guess he had yet to make a name for himself 12 years ago.” Crimson said.
“I see.” Chris said. “What about the Brigadier? Is he still alive?”
“Most definitely.” Crimson answered. “I've read articles about General Pj.”
“So he has gotten a promotion since then?” Chris asked.
“What does it sound like? Dumbass.” SEP said. “Anyways, let me continue.”

***

“We may really survive mom!” SEP said, his tears drying.
“Shall I proceed as planned?” The other revolutionary asked.
“Yes. Go ahead, Zazi Guado.” Bartz said.
“Very well then.” Zazi said and walked back to the townspeople. “Make sure to get the brigadier for good!”
“Oh, great revolutionary.” The woman from before said. “Have you come back to protect us here?”
Zazi drew one of his two swords and sliced her in half. A slight smile ghosted across his face. “I'm gonna slaughter every last one of you!”

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catastrophy15
07/26/12 4:17:00 PM
#172:


Hurray! I'm not dead yet and will most likely come back throughout this story. This is also an awesome back story that just this one chapter already tells me how messed up SEP's past was.

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XIII_rocks
07/26/12 4:20:00 PM
#173:


*dunks all over Zazi*

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muddersmilk
07/26/12 4:45:00 PM
#174:


Well that's not very nice Zazi.

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ctesjbuvf
07/27/12 4:20:00 PM
#175:


Up!

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pjbasis
07/27/12 4:55:00 PM
#176:


Introduced in backstory and foreshadowed as a major villain.

Awesome.

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ctesjbuvf
07/28/12 4:29:00 PM
#177:


And again.

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KCF0107
07/29/12 4:40:00 PM
#178:


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MajinZidane
07/29/12 4:44:00 PM
#179:


tag

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ctesjbuvf
07/30/12 4:17:00 PM
#180:


Okay, now I have to say this. My computer decided to die last week, and while I am trying to something about it, I can't promise that there's be a new chapter this Thursday. If it's gets ready before that, then I'll tell you ASAP. Don't worry though, if I can't get a chapter ready this week, there's be two chapters another week.

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pjbasis
07/30/12 4:22:00 PM
#181:


But....my scene!

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ctesjbuvf
07/30/12 4:27:00 PM
#182:


Looks like I made you worry for nothing. There will be a new The Revolution this Thursday as always!

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Sugisaki_Ken
07/30/12 4:30:00 PM
#183:


Caught up. Neat power for cata. Ooh, can't wait for the next one.

I forget, how many generals are there?

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ctesjbuvf
07/30/12 4:36:00 PM
#184:


There's no specific limit of how many generals there can be, and any rank of the WR for that matter. The exception is that there can only be three Three Leaders of the World as name gives away, but that's the only rank that has a limit, and people can't be promoted to it or demoted from it.

The amount of Generals is small though, smaller than any other rank, and to achieve that rank you have to have done something really exceptional.

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ctesjbuvf
07/30/12 4:38:00 PM
#185:


I really want to write it too. I'll do my best to have it ready.

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ctesjbuvf
07/31/12 4:01:00 PM
#186:


Short Preview of Chapter 12:
The intense fighting in Wutrance Town continues, and it's really getting to SEP. Team Bartz fights against WR Brigadier Pj, and we get to see the special abilities of all three.

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KCF0107
07/31/12 4:02:00 PM
#187:


I am finally caught up

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Pram_the_Oracle
07/31/12 4:03:00 PM
#188:


Woo!

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ctesjbuvf
08/01/12 4:19:00 PM
#189:


Tomorrow!

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ctesjbuvf
08/02/12 4:15:00 PM
#190:


Chapter 12 – The Tragedy is Revealed. There's still light ahead!

Zazi went on a rampage. He murdered everyone around him before they even noticed him.
“MOM! What do we do!?” SEP screamed, tears streaming from of his eyes.
“This way!” His mother said, panicking. She grabbed him and carried him away.
Zazi was still jumping around the area, killing everyone around him.
“Mom look out!” SEP screamed.
That was the last thing his mother heard before Zazi sliced her in half. Her upper body, which was carrying SEP, flew through a window. As the dead body dropped SEP, he flew through the window on the other side of the house and landed outside the house. He was screaming in complete trauma along with the rest of the townsfolk that Zazi had yet to murder.

Bartz was walking towards the Brigadier. He pulled a small gun, and shot every lieutenant that tried to stop him. Then he made an attempt at shooting the Brigadier, but he easily dodged it.
“Impressive.” Bartz said. “You really saw it coming. I've heard about your cool ability.”
“Is that so?” Pj said. He then charged at Bartz, though he didn't look serious. Bartz quickly took something from his pocket and threw it at PJ. PJ hurriedly dodged to the right and Bartz raised an eyebrow.
“There's no doubt you have a supernatural eyesight. Usually I hit people with that.” Bartz said.
“You may be skilled at throwing, but your targeting needs practice.” Pj told him.
“Don't underestimate me!” Bartz yelled. Then he picked up several bullets from his pocket. “Throwing is a fantastic ability after all!” Bartz then threw the bullets at Pj, one after another. However, Pj had no trouble dodging them with his incredible eyesight.
“What's your name?” Pj asked.
“Bartz.”
“Your ability is fairly interesting. It's a shame the world wont be seeing it again.” Pj said. “However, you can have the honor of me fighting semi-seriously.” Pj then pulled out a sword and ran towards Bartz.
“Man, you sound so cool, but you're just talk. I'm sure of it!” Bartz said. Then he picked up more bullets with his left hand, and used his gun to shoot with the right hand. Pj could see them way before they hit him and easily dodged them all without stopping, as he was prepared this time.
He got in close, and was about to slice Bartz in two. However, a sword came flying at him out of nowhere, blocking his strike. He hit that instead and sent it flying away.
“Need a helping hand, leader?” Zazi said, as he approached the scene. He had thrown away the sword he didn't need, saving Bartz with it.
“Not really.” Bartz said. “Go pick up that sword and kill the people as we had planned.”
“Ah, but I have already completed that task, leader.” Zazi replied. “Besides, I can just take the sword of this guy instead. It seems legit.”
“I can take care of this you bastard!” Bartz said, as Zazi was getting on his nerves.
“Of course, otherwise you wouldn't be my leader. But why not let me in on the fun too?” Zazi asked.
“Whatever.” Bartz mumbled.

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ctesjbuvf
08/02/12 4:19:00 PM
#191:


At the same time, SEP was screaming behind the house. However, when he could no longer hear screams, he stopped screaming himself. He was afraid of being spotted. That was when he noticed he was bleeding a bit after flying through two windows.
Why did it come to this. SEP thought. They've stopped screaming. Am I the only one left?
SEP was shaking in fear of the thought that Zazi would suddenly cut him. Then he saw something moving. It was a worm.
“Hello.” SEP told it. “It's nice to see someone else survived. Are all your friends dead too?” SEP was in a state where talking to a worm seemed totally normal.
“We can be friends.” SEP told it and smiled. “I'll name you Centwaur!” SEP tried getting it to crawl up on his finger. “Lets play together.” That was the last thing SEP said before a sword fell down from above and hit the worm - the sword Zazi had thrown at Pj. SEP keeled over backwards and passed out.

“Those are some pretty impressive dodging moves you got there.” Zazi told Pj. “I'm interested to see if they can compete with my acrobatics.”
“Well then go ahead.” Pj said. Zazi jumped up and swung his sword around above him, before falling towards Pj. Pj watched Zazi carefully, then blocked him off with his own sword. After the swords clashed, Zazi jumped back backwards and landed next to Bartz.
“His eyesight is incredible.” Bartz said. “He can easily see through that.”
“So it seems.” Zazi responded. “Our attacks haven't been working separately. We should attack together. You have enough bullets right?”
“Don't you worry about me.” Bartz said. “You may be 15 years older than me, but I'm the leader for a reason. You said that yourself.”
“It's true. That's why I'm doing my best to help you.” Zazi said. “Here goes!”
Zazi began swinging the sword around like crazy, while Bartz threw bullets at Pj from all sides. Like a master chess player, however, Pj was several moves ahead - and dodged or blocked every single one of their attacks. Then, suddenly, he was right next to Zazi. Before Zazi could blink, he had stabbed Zazi through the stomach. Zazi coughed up blood.
“Stop it!” Bartz said. “We'll retreat. In theory, we helped you with killing the people here.” He picked up Zazi from the ground.
“Go then.” Pj said. “You're no real threat anyways.”
“Don't mock me. It's part of my plan!” Bartz yelled.
“I don't care. That friend of yours though... why did he let me stab him?” Pj asked.
“You think he did that on purpose, you idiot?!” Bartz yelled. Then he left. Pj watched them go and then turned around.
“Lets go men. No one is left here anyways.”

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ctesjbuvf
08/02/12 4:20:00 PM
#192:


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“When I woke up no one was there. I picked up the sword that killed Centwaur and named it the same thing. I realized that day there is no good and evil. There's only evil, and if that's how the world works then I'm working with it.” SEP said.
“That's not true!” Chris interrupted him by yelling. “I know that there's fantastic revolutionaries out there. Wigs Gumfan! My brother, Cobain Achromatic!”
“Shut up! You don't know a thing!” SEP yelled. “Like everyone else I've met, you only care about yourself! Those two are from the same town, and if Cobain is your brother, then you're from that place as well! Everyone makes themselves sound great, but when it comes down to it they'll just kill everyone. Because that's how the works!
“No you shut up!” Chris yelled from the bottom of his heart. “Why do you think I call myself a revolutionary! I'm not saying it's a black and white world we live in. I know there exists all kinds of revolutionaries in this world, but my wish is to create peace and freedom for everyone, and I know that's what you wished for back then too...even if you're completely corrupted now.”
“What are you saying!?” SEP yelled.
“Bartz, Pj or whoever the **** else is out there. We can beat them all.” Chris said, with a more calm voice. “You want that peace too, right? You have to."
SEP was silent.
"Then lets beat them together. SEP, I'll ask you one final time. Will you join my team?”

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pjbasis
08/02/12 4:26:00 PM
#193:


Bartz got nothin on me

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agesboy
08/02/12 4:47:00 PM
#194:


tag for when I'm not working

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KCF0107
08/03/12 4:03:00 PM
#195:


I guess that motives will be revealed in a later chapter

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ctesjbuvf
08/03/12 4:18:00 PM
#196:


Oh yes! I'm excited about writing that myself.

Though for now I'm just excited about writing the next arc, which is about to start.

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KCF0107
08/04/12 4:01:00 PM
#197:


up

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StealThisSheen
08/04/12 4:30:00 PM
#198:


This story gets the SEPeal of approval.

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ctesjbuvf
08/04/12 4:31:00 PM
#199:


aww yeah

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ctesjbuvf
08/05/12 4:31:00 PM
#200:


Chapter Title Revealed!
Chapter 13: The Existence of Freedom. A New Journey can begin!

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